just something i wrote......
if a man believes he is a man, does it make him strong but unfit to serve thy master? for thoughts alone cannot prohibit the process of a human mind, but to develop and control ones emotion. deliverance of a dream is only based upon the facts of a dying anger therefore not just, but all brothers would be permitted to enter the sanctuary of insanity. thus, this proves to hinder and restrain a mans emotion of fecklessness and and can only serve in the belief of a broken and misguided humanity
for a king is only deemed royal if his intentions are clear. there can be no axe to grind, no lack of faith, no self adoration. for the pain etched in his eyes is but a mask of sorrow, a facade to fool the people. he cares not for the true perception of reality but refrains from telling truths. For inside his prison is no sanctuary, just a key to unlock his sorrow. Its here that he shelters himself from the world around him and takes comfort in the knowledge he has asked too much yet gained so little.
written by scott bonner (me!)
for a king is only deemed royal if his intentions are clear. there can be no axe to grind, no lack of faith, no self adoration. for the pain etched in his eyes is but a mask of sorrow, a facade to fool the people. he cares not for the true perception of reality but refrains from telling truths. For inside his prison is no sanctuary, just a key to unlock his sorrow. Its here that he shelters himself from the world around him and takes comfort in the knowledge he has asked too much yet gained so little.
written by scott bonner (me!)
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Copy and paste is a wonderful tool! Heterozersexuals aren't known for their deepness!!
I recommend a penstyle to fix it
Posted 01-26-2009 at 08:54 PM by tribalmasters
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cheeky git! i will have you know that i have a very sensitive soul!
ive been writing songs and poems since i 1st picked up the guitar at the age of 9. sometimes i write good stuff, sometimes i write crap! lolPosted 01-26-2009 at 08:59 PM by igetcha
Updated 01-26-2009 at 09:02 PM by igetcha - Awww bless ya hehehehehe!!!Posted 01-26-2009 at 09:03 PM by tribalmasters
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Very well written, Scott.Posted 03-23-2009 at 10:49 AM by Exylis -
You have a unique nice style of writing...I think you are serious enough with it;if you are not still now;think seriously for your writings...your girlfriend must be always appreciating your creativity I think (you are good looking guy with nice voice too!)...this world needs more people like you...Posted 12-25-2009 at 09:00 AM by idoesmoking - I'm next in line for his love :PPosted 12-25-2009 at 01:54 PM by tribalmasters
- yes, form an orderly queue please! lol
have a great christmas guys
Posted 12-25-2009 at 07:45 PM by igetcha - Thanks Igetcha you too and happy vapings!!
Things were quie this Christmas Got no vaping equipment under the tree, did get an Amazon gift certificate so bought myself a glow in the dark computer keyboard for flight sim
Other than that I got joke stuff and a new computer desk is on its way!!
I bet its fun in your household, Children are what makes Christmas so special!!Posted 12-25-2009 at 07:56 PM by tribalmasters
