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    Do you want grammar corrections? I don't want to sound critical, but if you do want suggestions, here goes:

    copied & pasted from the home page:

    Diyflavorshack is Not a smoke free enviorment, some of my help smoke and I just cannot ask them not to as I hated that when i was a smoker. My help is very good the team i have put together is making it easier fo rme to get the orders out in 2 days, so i ask you to please understand
    thank you

    enviroment is spelled wrong - should be environment
    fo rme probably should be for me so i ask probably should be capital I

    The run-on sentence might read better with a period then a new sentence such as:

    Diyflavorshack is Not a smoke-free environment. Some of my help still smoke cigarettes. I cannot ask them not to smoke as I hated that when I was a smoker. My helpers are very good. The team I have put together is making it easier for me to get the orders out in 2 days, so I ask you to please understand! Thank you.

    Nice site BTW
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    [QUOTE][/not sure those are mistakes ... the site open 24 hours.. help me make i t look better.
    hugss dawnQUOTE]
    on the terms and conditions page it says you must be over 18 on the main page it says must be over 22

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    Hi,Dawn-
    On the "Contact Us" page it states
    'Email Us Your Question OR YOU CAN CALL US AT 702-807-7215'

    There is no e-mail addy listed on that page

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    Okay,Not a mistake-I just wanted to say THANK you for the "Guide to Dripping"!! Nervous to venture into it and you finally explained it beautifully!

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    Great

    thank you guyssssssssss

    this is all so helpful

    hugsss contest continues
    Pre mixed Elquids and DIY, Do It Yourself Tools Kits & Vapor Juiceshttp://www.diyflavorshack.com

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    There is no link to Facebook next to "Follow us on Twitter and FaceBook"


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    On the "contact us" page
    Email us doesn't link to anything


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    Ok, so I'm using an ipad, so maybe it's just the quirks of that platform...
    This page has a lot of weird punctuation
    http://ecigsmokestore.com/flavors.html
    The main page is just not visually appealing.
    >The words(links) in the left column are cut off by the "bubbles" separating the columns. It's clickable, though, so it works.
    >it looks like the intro to Star Wars, the way the text is aligned. Maybe justify the text here and there?




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    I just wanted to say that none of these errors would prevent me from dipping my toes in and making an order. I love the guides.
    I actually like Star Wars 😄


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    thank you...........................

    Quote Originally Posted by daddytwigs View Post
    I just wanted to say that none of these errors would prevent me from dipping my toes in and making an order. I love the guides.
    I actually like Star Wars ��


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    Pre mixed Elquids and DIY, Do It Yourself Tools Kits & Vapor Juiceshttp://www.diyflavorshack.com

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