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    Site looks great, didnt see any mistakes that haven't been mentioned

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    #8
    Cinnamon Eliquid

    "cinnamin" should be "cinnamon"
    My mechanic couldn't fix my breaks,
    so he made my horn louder.


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    Butterscotch Almond Bars

    "fo rme" should be "for me"
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    #10
    Bit O Honey E-Liquid

    "ssweet" should be "sweet"
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    #11
    Ti Amo E-Liquid

    "ambroshia" should be "ambrosia"
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    #12
    Straberry Margarita E-Liquid


    Liquid name and link page, "Strawberry" is spelled wrong.

    Same here:
    http://www.diyflavorshack.com/Produc...o++Mar+Eliquid
    Last edited by thehangdude; 01-26-2014 at 01:53 AM.
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    Pretzels E-Liquid

    "AANYONE" should be "ANYONE"
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    #14
    Hawian Shack E-Liquid

    Name should be "Hawaiian Shack E-Liquid"
    I know, it looks like too many vowels.

    Also in description "pimeapple" should be "pineapple"

    #14.5
    http://www.diyflavorshack.com/Produc...O+++E%2DLiquid

    Again "pimeapple" should be "pineapple"
    Last edited by thehangdude; 01-26-2014 at 01:59 AM.
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    Elvis Prestley E-Liquid

    Name should be Presley, not Prestley.
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    #16
    Pomegranate Surprise E Liquid

    "lov e" should be "love"

    OK, this has really helped my OCD. Thanks Dawn! I might be back for more.
    I did notice several places that need punctuation and some capital letter errors.

    The basic site looks very good! And easy to negotiate!
    My mechanic couldn't fix my breaks,
    so he made my horn louder.


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