my Janty stick v3 review in E-Cigarette Reviews; YouTube - Janty Stick V3 Review...
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my Janty stick v3 review
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I see where you were going with this, but quit watching about 1/3 way through. The video is dark (each item you show looks like a black blob). Grainy - most likely due to the camera trying to adjust for the lack of light. The info I got by the time I gave up could have been relayed in the same time it took to watch the drawn out intro. "Here is the Janty stick I received, it comes with mains charger, US adapter, batteries, and 2 510 atomizers (or whatever)" is much more watchable then "Picture of you holding item" wait wait wait title -"Batteries" wait wait wait "Next picture" wait wait title - "charger" etc. etc. etc. The drum loop got old after the 3rd time it restarted.
Add some lights, shorten your intro, and tell me about the product... and if you are going to use a loop, get into fruity loops or some other program, and chain a few together to make it interesting.
Of course this is just my 2 cents, and you can take it or leave it. Best of luck.
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yeh it wasnt one of my best i may redo it but i had a lot of info to get out and as far as the "loop" it was the instrumental to POP CHAMPANGE by ron brows but thankes for your input
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Dude! lighting aside, I seriously liked your video. Simple information, no meaningless chatter, easily translated for the english-as-a-second-language crowd. And found myself laughing everytime you gave that million-dollar ' 'thumbs up' smile!
Looking forward to the next review!
TTRP
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