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    Here's my contrib to revive this necro-thread...

    Time

    Vacuum and blackness surround
    infinite eyes of the night.
    Millennia of change abound
    as massive bodies take flight.
    The celestial playground expands
    disclosing waves we scarcely detect.
    Glorious incomprehension demands
    our attentions toward vast effect.
    Zealously, to satiate our wonder,
    we label its intriguing face.
    To comprehend the continuity we’re under
    we misinterpret this entity—Space.



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    Chad, you should send that to the moon.....literally. It's beautiful.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kate51 View Post
    Chad, you should send that to the moon.....literally. It's beautiful.
    Thank you so much Kate51! It feels good to have such a nice compliment.

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    Very nice Chad!


    This one is a bit silly but I wrote it this morning and more so thoughts than poetry really....

    I wish I was your cat

    So I could curl up in your lap
    Demand your attention
    Ignore your rejections
    Keep coming back
    Revel in your affections
    When it suits you...

    I wish I was your cat

    And when you annoy me
    Pretend to ignore you
    Turn my back to you
    Peeking round to see
    If you notice me
    Not noticing you
    Noticing me
    pretending
    Not to love you
    When all the time I do!

    And when you don't notice or seem to care
    I could swat at you to remind you I am there
    Leave me alone for a few days at a time
    Then put up with me bitching about it when you return
    And you give me a little snuggle to ease my mind

    Tease me with a string on a stick
    Dangle it to watch me pounce
    Tease me then deny me by jerking it
    out
    of
    reach
    But once in awhile
    Let me catch it

    But I'm not a cat.

    Long held affection
    Self-induced frustration
    Some kind of wonderful
    Based on reflections
    Of observations
    and
    Inner computations
    Recursive emotions
    Deep rooted devotions


    I need to get away
    From those moments
    That bring me joy


    I already know what I have to do


    The things I have been doing
    To get my mind less
    Focused on you
    Are just not working
    Are only hurting me
    And recently others


    And so I realize I need
    I need…


    To stop feeling
    To cut off the limb
    That keeps me connected
    The one that began to grow
    The moment I met you


    It all adds up in my head
    But my head is distracted
    Cause my heart just wants
    To be your cat
    And swat the **** out of you
    Till you never forget
    I need you


    Life stands still for no one
    yet here I stand
    Waving like a lunatic
    With a smile on my face
    Hearing a buzzing sound in my head
    Like the sound of a can-opener
    Whenever I hear your voice
    Or even think of you


    I’m so totally fscked.



    I wish I was your cat.

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