Collabrative story chatter thread.

[Mac]

I think we are off to a very interesting start. I can't wait to see what happens next.

It takes some time to type up these posts so let's announce that we are taking on the next part so no one else jumps the gun. This should preserve the continuity of the story line.

 

[whynotvap]

Writing a potential follow-up to 'Hiro and the girl'. Yes the name is a blatant ripoff of Hiro Protagonist from Snow Crash but I needed a name.

 

[Mac]

OMG that's too funny!

 

[whynotvap]

OMG that's too funny!

I wasn't positive if you wanted 'her' to be a new type of infected or an actual survivor so I stopped there...

 

[Mac]

I wasn't positive if you wanted 'her' to be a new type of infected or an actual survivor so I stopped there...

No wrong answers here! Loved it! And now at least one of our main characters has a name! This is shaping up to be a very interesting story...

 

[whynotvap]

Okay, in the interest of keeping the story readable. I'm making this thread for random chatter about the story and to put all the non-story posts in.

I'll leave any "I'm working on the next part" posts up until either a few hours pass without an update being posted on it's progress or until it's actually posted.

Please post in the main story thread if you're planning to contribute so someone doesn't get caught out in a plot split.

Also, post a 'done' after your post if you're adding to your original posting so we all know it's safe to work from that point.

Oh, yeah. Don't worry about getting critiqued about your work. If someone says something about your work that you don't like. Let me know and I'll take care of it. Actually, if I don't like what you've said about someone's work, I'll probably delete it myself even if they're not offended by it. Let's keep it fun!!!

 

[technovapir]

Thanks you guys! I appreciate all your efforts. I would like to add to the story but I'm feeling the total opposite of creative this week, so I'll just have to relax and enjoy the story as it unfolds by your pens. Mabe it will kick start my writer's block...

 

[Mac]

Mutt please put your work back up! I will tie the three and the next person can go from there. Hiro can recover from the huge mistake he just made and make it 150 miles south! (Or can he?? bwahahahahahahacoughcoughwheeze)

No more posts till Mutts part goes back up! Doctor Morbid has spoken! (please tell me you didn't delete that friggin genius post dude)

 

[Mac]

I am going to bridge now. the next part of our story will be written by me and in two parts. The first will bridge Whynot's and the second will depend on what Mutt does..

It is totally cool to jump around in time and to different geographical locations. Keeping up with your fellow writer's warped imagination is half the fun!

 

[muttSRT]

I kept it...was going to post it once the guy/girl rode off on the harley so it made sense, but if you can tie it together, i will re-post now.

 

[Mac]

Bridge done. Starting second post now!

 

[Mac]

Done. Next post is available for whoever would like to claim it.

 

[muttSRT]

Nice addition...I see where you are going as far as making the posts work out...

First time I am ever trying to write something, so I was a little lost there for a few...

 

[Mac]

Nice addition...I see where you are going as far as making the posts work out...

First time I am ever trying to write something, so I was a little lost there for a few...

Your lack of experience speaks volumes about your natural talent. Keep writing dude. Seriously.

 

[muttSRT]

We need names to keep track of the characters.

Hiro- Harley rider
Ella Montgomery- the girl
Gabriel- survivor in the city


If someone has any ideas for names, post em up...even if you dont write a segment for the story.

 

[muttSRT]

Your lack of experience speaks volumes about your natural talent. Keep writing dude. Seriously.

I appreciate that Mac...after I posted it, I had doubts, but if you approve, I will continue to try.


On a side note- This would be incredible if it could be filmed by our resident movie star!

 

[CES]

Loving the story so far....y'all are pretty impressive. I'm not nearly awake enough to figure out if i can contribute yet....but I'll at least try to think of names. BTW, our Hiro seems like he might be the kind of guy to name his bike too.

 

[muttSRT]

Funny you should mention that. I always named my bike and name my truck/cars as well. I never could understand those rednecks who had the balls dangling from the back of their trucks though. If your a guy, your vehicles name has to be feminine. Your supposed to be a guy riding the girl, not a guy riding the guy, it never made sense to me.

All my Harleys had the same first name, but a different number, ..... #1, ..... #2 etc...the last Harley Was ..... #8. I called them that because my wife was worried about other women, I told her the only other ..... for me had 2 wheels.

 

[Mac]

This just keeps getting better and better... I'll go again. Posting momentarily.

 

[muttSRT]

Nice Mac! I was wondering how he was going to remember her. I made it that far and my mind went blank. Brilliant!