Diyflavorshack-january contest.. Free juice and 25.00 gift certificate

[Sdh]

Hi!
Near the bottom of this page I see the word "cant". It should say "can't".
http://www.diyflavorshack.com/default.asp

It is listed above your six-pack of diy flavors.

A definition of the word "cant".
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/cant

 

[vsummer1]

OLD WEST IS OUR FAVORITE RED AND WHITES Marly
also SOME CIGARS HAVE BEEN CHANGED
TO BLACK JACK MIiD is now Black Jack & BLACK JACK WINE is now Black Jack Plus
IT IS STILL THERE BUT A NAME CHANGE as we do not intend to infridge on copright

You infringe a copyright, not put a cop right in the fridge to cool off? Not sure what Black Jack MIiD is so not sure if it is a typo. Spacing after Jack...

Can you tell I was an Administrative Assistant before I was and RN Now I am just a gimp with lots of time and no money...

 

[vsummer1]

PROMOTIONS WIll Be here ALL the TIME Do not forget to CHECK
Check Coupon codes on site
"newtoyou"- New customer code with a $20.00 Order
"freeshipping" - on orders over $100.00
ONE COUPON PER ORDER

One capitalization, one period after time

 

[vsummer1]

Flavors and DIY Flavors Available page needs updating if you see it as a eliquid I have it and you can request it in the 6,10 & 20ml Packs.
IF YOU KNOW I CARRY A e-liquid AND IT IS NOT ON THE e-liquid PAGE YOU CAN ORDER IT IN THE 6 PACK OR IN THE CUSTOM SECTION.
Help Line Is Available Monday - Wed

It is AN e-liquid, not A eliquid. If you spell out Monday, you should spell out Wednesday. Spacing on the 6,10

 

[vsummer1]

Remember if you are looking for any of the New Flavors
and they are not up yet.
You can request them in the Custom Mix and I will make them for you

Period in middle of sentence, none at end.

 

[vsummer1]

Spacing issue:

ESTIMATED PROCESSING TIME: 24-48 HOURS ( this is the time it takes to prepare your order)

 

[vsummer1]

PLEASE BEFORE ORDERING
ORDER 6ML BOTTLE SAMPLERS
I CAN NOT KEEP REPLACING ORDERS AS MUCH AS I WANT TO BE NUMBER ONE IN CUSTOMER SERVICE. THIS IS NOT WORTH FOR MY STORE TO BE OPEN AND TO REPLACE A FLAVOR JUST BECAUSE IT MAY NOT BE TO YOUR TASTE.

Missing the word "IT"

 

[vsummer1]

New Customer 10 percent Off Code is newtoyou
Order must be Over 20.00
We Also Support Out Troops & Military
Email Me for the Code


Thank You all so much for your support

Please Read This
ALL I ASK FOR PATIENCE
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR UNDERSTANDING

missing "is" when asking for patience.

You give the military code further up the page...

 

[vsummer1]

I Try to answer the phone all week days as I Love to help you guys with your questions
DONT FORGET I WILL SPECIAL MIX FLAVORS FOR YOU

It doesn't show here, but the world help has a the font size changed in the middle of it.

 

[vsummer1]

UPFRONT AND HONEST- all information is on this page and get updated daily PLEASE bookmark this page
If you smoke or know someone who does. E-Cig is the best gift to receive or give. Another chance at life!

SHOULD READ: If you smoke, or know someone who does, e-cig is the best gift to receive or give another chance at life!

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Diyflavorshack is Not a smoke free enviorment, some of my help smoke and I just cannot ask them not to as I hated that when i was a smoker. My help is very good the team i have put together is making it easier fo rme to get the orders out in 2 days, so i ask you to please understand
thank you

Capitalization on "i". Should read: My help is very good, the team I have put together is making it easier for me to get the orders out in 2 days, so I ask you to please understand.

also, spelling on environment

 

[vsummer1]

That was a lot, now I am venturing off the first page. Here is one under your featured products:

6 Pack of Flavoring Exoctics

exotics

 

[vsummer1]

This is the section:
This is the "SILVER" DIY Kit -This Kit Contains NO NICOTINE

Typos are:
ALL KITS COME WITHT HE SAME TOOLS- ONLY NICOTINE IS DIFFERENT


("Nicosorb is 1 bag of Fluval & 1-bag of 100% Poly-Fill (The Right Stuff)

You have the open quotations but no closing ". You have a begin parentheses, but no end, and if the end is after (The Right Stuff) then you need another end parentheses. It would read better like this as double parentheses are generally frowned upon:

("Nicosorb" is 1 bag of Fluval & 1 bag of 100% Poly-fill -- The Right Stuff)

 

[vsummer1]

Under your DIY 6 packs, you have the word "can't" on every one of them spelled cant.

On some of them it reads:
Cant Decide
These are Do It Yourself Flavoring Not Elquids

 

[morri]

Hello Dawn!

This is from the first page, it is on the right side, under ... Deal of the day!


ALL KITS COME WITHT HE SAME TOOLS- ONLY NICOTINE IS DIFFERENT

should say:

ALL KITS COME WITH THE SAME TOOLS- ONLY NICOTINE IS DIFFERENT


Actually Dawn, if you don't mind me saying, the site would be a lot more
user friendly and easy to understand if word with all capitol letters or
"loud text" .... is kept to a minimum. In that case the sentence would look
like this:

All kits come with the same tools. Only Nicotine is different.

hugs,
Morri

 

[dawnmarie]

thank you

copy paste.. i forget that is loud..

thanks dawn

winner coming out on wed

 

[thewrightstuff]

http://ecigsmokestore.com/eliquid.html

I am currantly updating if you see something on the website you can order it in the six pack or custom section

currently

 

[Barto]

ecigsmokestore.com

currently

Good stuff. Thanks for linking man!