Feedback on my new e cig video.

[tissan88]

Hey guys , just made a new e cig promotional video .
This is my first time making one , had to use windows movie maker.

let me know what you think.

YouTube - Greentip electronic cigarettes

 

[optsmk]

You might want to talk about your product instead of playing the music in the background. Kinda sounds like music you would hear in a gay club in San Francisco. IMHO

 

[beast775]

the music ,but i was a bit to busy, trying to look at everything in the ad.to much i think.

 

[tissan88]

You might want to talk about your product instead of playing the music in the background. Kinda sounds like music you would hear in a gay club in San Francisco. IMHO

Youtube is strict about music copyright.
I have never been in a gay club lol ...but thanks for the suggestion.

 

[tissan88]

the music ,but i was a bit to busy, trying to look at everything in the ad.to much i think.

Simple= Better . Got it . Thanks man.

 

[Locutus666]

Kind of an sudden ending, also, but I liked it overall.

 

[Emptee]

I like how you had a "theme" and stuck with it. By that I mean the green. The colors went well and went great with your name. Like Locutus said the ending was too sudden. A simple fade out always will do the trick but make sure if you are going to have music play the whole time, then the music will fade gradually as well. Other then that its a decent promo vid for WMM. =)

 

[shatner]

Sorry, but I highly doubt 1 cart is equal to a pack of smokes. Also, slow the text down. I'm not a slow reader, have 20/20 vision and it was still a bit fast. And the red 'nicotine' on black background was kinda hard to see.

And I agree with the no music, expanation idea.

 

[Kilroy]

I cut it off at 1:00. Too much.

 

[aerocrux]

hahaha gay club! LOL

reupload it with dubstep as background music!

atleast ppl will view it 50x over for the song LOL

I know I would haha

Datsik & Excision FTW

 

[Elendil]

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