reserved, will check it out tonight, looking forward to watching this... if i had editing software id volunteer to edit for you... used to do it on a semi professional level but never had the software myself... definitely none of those jump cuts...
the best way to do edits if you cant get them to join well would be to cut to something else then cut back... doing this makes it seem much smoother, it also helps to do multiple takes of the same clip, approximately 3 full script (using a script is absolutely ideal, you can go off script but it helps to keep you on track and get to the points) then do another 3 takes of various sections... (3 good takes)
Ok I will say it is a very good review, I only have 3 gripes, 1 of which is purely editorial as you brought up before. Trying to be constructive and help you make what i feel would be an outstanding review... not trying to offend or be rude...
so it is a bit jumpy... now this is something that with pretty much every review i have ever watched minorly bugs me... a better transition, for example the first time you switched cameras take a vape blow the vape in the camera then when the "vape" clears your in the view of the reo... just a smoother transition, its not just you, its pretty much all reviewers...
then like i had suggested before watching... a script would be super... it was a great review... really great but you repeated the same things a few times... at various points... not a horrible thing, not even a bad thing... just a bit of a script would help things a bit...
the only thing that really irked me was you kinda switched the kind of review you were doing, you kinda switched back and forth between absolute basics, and advanced... one second the review seemed to be aimed at someone who was looking at buying their first
ecig ever, the next it seemed it was aimed at someone making the switch to a mechanical from an ego or a regulated apv, and it also switched to someone who had used mechs...
if you kept it more intermediate to advanced that would be super, idk something about a brand new never had an ecig user grabbing a mech scares me a bit... so its ok if they get confused a little, id rather they take a step or two first...
so i might i suggest one of two things in lieu of this... (hoping this isnt coming across as arrogant or demeaning) try either an intermediate style review peppering in a few things for advanced, and explaining the advanced... or intermediate up front, then moving to advanced, showing bits and pieces for advanced users as well...
hope this didnt offend and that it helped... great review... totally jealous of your vape lounge... and the awesome amount of stuff... lol