I am working on a little design, and I want to word it as best as possible. I would like to ask for the members of ECF to help me word this properly to deliver the most succinct message.
The design will include text similar to the following (or whatever we come up with):
The FDA Cares for our well-being.
(With "Approved" stamps: )
CIGARETTES:
Thousands of harmful chemicals. Numerous causes of almost sure death.
PRESCRIPTION MEDICATIONS:
Many newly researched and not fully understood drugs. Many instances of death.
PATCHES, GUM, LOZENGES:
Nicotine and food additives. Low success rate of stopping smoking.
(With "Un-Approved" stamp: )
ELECTRONIC CIGARETTES:
Nicotine and food additives. High success rate of stopping smoking.
Please critique, edit, alter, add, etc with your advice on what would deliver the best message.
The design will include text similar to the following (or whatever we come up with):
The FDA Cares for our well-being.
(With "Approved" stamps: )
CIGARETTES:
Thousands of harmful chemicals. Numerous causes of almost sure death.
PRESCRIPTION MEDICATIONS:
Many newly researched and not fully understood drugs. Many instances of death.
PATCHES, GUM, LOZENGES:
Nicotine and food additives. Low success rate of stopping smoking.
(With "Un-Approved" stamp: )
ELECTRONIC CIGARETTES:
Nicotine and food additives. High success rate of stopping smoking.
Please critique, edit, alter, add, etc with your advice on what would deliver the best message.