A Poem.......

[Logan4_uk]

Could i have your interpretations please

Have you ever listened
To the sound of a voice
That penetrates you deeply
Leaves you no choice

But to follow the words
All the way down
Sinking deeper and deeper
As you hear the sound

Picture yourself
Falling under, spinning in space
Not knowing the bottom or top
Up and down has no place

Find yourself
In the most comfortable state
Where boundries disappear
And inhibitions are erased

After you've been there
You won't want it to end
The place of unlimited pleasure
A lover and a friend

Let it all go
Feel everything that there is to feel
As you picture it in your mind
Make it more and more real

The more you think about
How good it is going to be
The more it will give you unbelievable pleasure
And set you forever free

Only one voice can accomplish this
See, listen and feel between your sighs
You have your own reasons for deciding
Who gives you this prize ..

 

[bearscreek]

I'm terrible with poetry, but that sounds like someone is about to die.

 

[gpdo24]

I'm terrible with poetry, but that sounds like someone is about to die.

Possibly an accurate description of the surprise that awaits sleepers when they do pass. The awake can sometimes taste it here and now.
Sounds more like the 'love' of Rumi to me though. Yet love and death are both Ecstatic in their removal of conditioned occlusions.
Thanks for the poem..gave some pause.

 

[Mac]

Well written. Solid, consistant, rhyme scheme. I like it.

 

[dedmonwakin]

I read a quest for blissfulness.

Not so much the search of peace in death or finding peace in death. But a sense of enlightenment through imagination. And during the vision, it's realized that the search is not as far or as hard as one would think. The state of bliss can be chosen by it's seeker, all one has to do is decide whom or what.

 

[Caesarea]

Sounds like a Paul McKenna CD....maybe the one on confidence....

Lol,


C.