Cinder Ella / Number Game - Part 1

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I stand here, a dark shadow
Enshrouded by bleak mist
Hand in hand with sorrow
Never again to be kissed

I stand here, my head is bowed
Tears falling to the ground
I'm full of rage and twisted anguish
But my screams, they make no sound

I stand here, begging, pleading
In this eternity of night
Deep inside me, my heart lies bleeding
This pain, it is not right

I stand here, in rage and fear
Life has left me with it's scars
I am alone, theres no-one here
To hold me, in the dark

By: Peter Truman
 

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I stand here, a dark shadow
Enshrouded by bleak mist
Hand in hand with sorrow
Never again to be kissed

I stand here, my head is bowed
Tears falling to the ground
I'm full of rage and twisted anguish
But my screams, they make no sound

I stand here, begging, pleading
In this eternity of night
Deep inside me, my heart lies bleeding
This pain, it is not right

I stand here, in rage and fear
Life has left me with it's scars
I am alone, theres no-one here
To hold me, in the dark

By: Peter Truman

That is good writing, it has feeling.
 

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Joy
By: Peter Truman


There is a joy thats known to me
Of how to to care love and be free
But what does knowledge of those mean,
When they have come, gone and been?

To lose someone, to lose a friend
Is bad enough, it hurts inside
But to lose a loved one, for whom you did care
Takes life away, makes you crawl and hide.

It takes a lot to show you care
It takes a while to know the stare
Gazing into eyes that love you
And the joy thats felt when that love is true.
 
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