Critique of demo videos-

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jacatro

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While I find the videos extremely helpful, I have some suggestions to make them more watchable, and therefore get more traffic:
1. Lose the Heavy Metal music-Boom- you just lost more than half your demographic in the first 2 seconds- that goes for Rap music too-In fact, I have Pandora if I want to hear a song.
2. Speaking of music, how's about turning it off while you're talking so we can hear what you are saying?
3. Do a little test run before you get your face out there- we are more interested in what you are doing with the product than what team is on your baseball cap.
4. Take the baseball cap off- it's not cute.
5. If you INSIST on giving us a panoramic view of your bedroom rather than the product, PLEASE put your pets away- they're not cute either- same goes for those boxer shorts on the bedpost.
Cheers!
 

getpecked

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While I find the videos extremely helpful, I have some suggestions to make them more watchable, and therefore get more traffic:
1. Lose the Heavy Metal music-Boom- you just lost more than half your demographic in the first 2 seconds- that goes for Rap music too-In fact, I have Pandora if I want to hear a song.
2. Speaking of music, how's about turning it off while you're talking so we can hear what you are saying?
3. Do a little test run before you get your face out there- we are more interested in what you are doing with the product than what team is on your baseball cap.
4. Take the baseball cap off- it's not cute.
5. If you INSIST on giving us a panoramic view of your bedroom rather than the product, PLEASE put your pets away- they're not cute either- same goes for those boxer shorts on the bedpost.
Cheers!

Where are your demo vids? I'd like to take a look!
 
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