healthcabin's business card !!!

[newsunshine]

Hi, dear guys!

we just made our business card and want your advice and suggestion.

here go pics of front side and back side.

 

[greyeyes]

I think they look great! My only suggestion would be to wait until you've selected a "slogan" and then add it to the cards before you have a ton of them printed up. Otherwise, it looks that you've added all possible information that anyone would need to know in order to contact you/order from you, and what products you carry. BTW, I love the colors!

 

[newsunshine]

I think they look great! My only suggestion would be to wait until you've selected a "slogan" and then add it to the cards before you have a ton of them printed up. Otherwise, it looks that you've added all possible information that anyone would need to know in order to contact you/order from you, and what products you carry. BTW, I love the colors!

Dear greyeyes, you are exactly right.

we are waiting for our slogan and then print them tons.

we find that some customers do not use internet very often, so we think a business card may be helpful when they are offline.

we have printed some test business card and added them to each order to see whether our customers will find them helpful.

Thank u for your suggestion!

 

[striker_217]

Hello,

I am after a 510 kit in BLACK preferably with a WHITE LED supplied with an AUTO and a MANUAL battery. Yes maybe a little too much to ask for, but CAN you supply it?

I have read only good things about your customer service on the forum and will purchase from you if you would be able to supply to those preferences. The AUTO and MANUAL batteries (one of each) are a MUST as I will be buying for my DAD and I do not know which he would prefer so need both for him to try. I can settle for RED LED if you cannot do WHITE.

IN TERMS of the business card I would suggest:

1. REMOVE the "htttp://" on the right hand side where your website address appears.
2. Keeping with the healthy theme, add something like a small faint stream in matching blue on the bottom right hand corner to reduce the emptiness of the card.
3. Remove the YAHOO e-mail and replace with a telephone number - and address if possible in very small print at the bottom like the small print on the back
4. Instead of "features the following products" write: "Stock following E-Cigarette Product" - the word "E-Cigarette" MUST be on the card somewhere since this is your main business.

Thats the main changes that should increase efficiency in terms of people actually making use of the info on there. I have a Marketing degree so hopefully I know what I am talking about lol

 

[Moobyghost]

1. take off the http://
2. go with a softer white background.

 

[striker_217]

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Hello,

I am after a 510 kit in BLACK preferably with a WHITE LED supplied with an AUTO and a MANUAL battery. Yes maybe a little too much to ask for, but CAN you supply it?

I have read only good things about your customer service on the forum and will purchase from you if you would be able to supply to those preferences. The AUTO and MANUAL batteries (one of each) are a MUST as I will be buying for my DAD and I do not know which he would prefer so need both for him to try. I can settle for RED LED if you cannot do WHITE.

IN TERMS of the business card I would suggest:

1. REMOVE the "htttp://" on the right hand side where your website address appears.
2. Keeping with the healthy theme, add something like a small faint stream in matching blue on the bottom right hand corner to reduce the emptiness of the card (on the front side).
3. Remove the YAHOO e-mail and replace with a telephone number - and address if possible in very small print at the bottom like the small print on the back
4. Instead of "features the following products" write: "Stocks (or Features) the following E-Cigarette Products" - the word "E-Cigarette" MUST be on the card somewhere since this is your main business.

Thats the main changes that should increase efficiency in terms of people actually making use of the info on there. I have a Marketing degree so hopefully I know what I am talking about lol[/QUOTE]

 

[newsunshine]

REVISED SPELLING ERRORS SINCE THERE IS NO EDIT BUTTON!!

IGNORE PREVIOUS POST!

Hello,

I am after a 510 kit in BLACK preferably with a WHITE LED supplied with an AUTO and a MANUAL battery. Yes maybe a little too much to ask for, but CAN you supply it?

I have read only good things about your customer service on the forum and will purchase from you if you would be able to supply to those preferences. The AUTO and MANUAL batteries (one of each) are a MUST as I will be buying for my DAD and I do not know which he would prefer so need both for him to try. I can settle for RED LED if you cannot do WHITE.

IN TERMS of the business card I would suggest:

1. REMOVE the "htttp://" on the right hand side where your website address appears.
2. Keeping with the healthy theme, add something like a small faint stream in matching blue on the bottom right hand corner to reduce the emptiness of the card (on the front side).
3. Remove the YAHOO e-mail and replace with a telephone number - and address if possible in very small print at the bottom like the small print on the back
4. Instead of "features the following products" write: "Stocks (or Features) the following E-Cigarette Products" - the word "E-Cigarette" MUST be on the card somewhere since this is your main business.

Thats the main changes that should increase efficiency in terms of people actually making use of the info on there. I have a Marketing degree so hopefully I know what I am talking about lol

[/quote]

1. take off the http://
2. go with a softer white background.

Thank you very much for your suggestion. it is very helpful.

we think, if we put E-cigarette on the card, it may cause needless trouble. the models of ecigs on the card will let people know what our main business is if he know what the eicg is.

please tell us what you think.

 

[striker_217]

If your cards will only be handed out to people who already use e-cigs, then having E-Cigarette on the card is not necessary.

I would still recommend all the other changes I mentioned though