My e-cig e-book is done!

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NathanS

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    I have finished the first draft of my e-cig e-book. I just need to add some tips and tricks to the tips and tricks section.'

    Here is the pdf e-book if you want a copy:

    e-cigarette-guide.com/E-cig%20Guide.pdf

    If you have any sugestion for things to add please let me know. Also i really would like to add some peoples tips and trick so if you have any wou want to add please contact me.

    If you want to keep getting the new versions of this guide please sign up at my website, e-cigarette-guide.com

    Thanks
     

    eyespy

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    Hey Nathan - are you doing this for a school report or something ? - it comes across as a little naive to me.

    I would certainly change the following statement:

    "There are cartridges that hove NO Nicotine in them, that’s right you can smoke without any health risks. This would be great for anyone who is addicted to the physical action of smoking."


    ....it may come back to haunt you in the future :cry:
     

    Grumpysanta

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    Extracted from the book
    There are cartridges that hove NO Nicotine in
    them, that’s right you can smoke without any health risks. This would be
    great for anyone who is addicted to the physical action of smoking.

    Just spotted a typo, also Tricks and Tips, as you haven't put anything in the book is it a good idea to have the title?
     

    NathanS

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    How should i reword this. Are you saying i should just take out the part saying "no health risks" ?

    "There are cartridges that hove NO Nicotine in them, that’s right you can smoke without any health risks. This would be great for anyone who is addicted to the physical action of smoking."

    No i'm not doing this for a school paper. When you say it sounds narative is that a bad thing, i guess thats just my writing style.

    I left the tips and trick title because i plan on adding info there. I was hoping some people might subbmit their tips or tricks for me to add.

     

    eyespy

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    How should i reword this. Are you saying i should just take out the part saying "no health risks" ?

    "There are cartridges that hove NO Nicotine in them, that’s right you can smoke without any health risks. This would be great for anyone who is addicted to the physical action of smoking."

    I would suggest something like:

    "Zero nicotine content liquid and pre-filled cartridges are available for users trying to rid themselves of a nicotine addiction or for users wanting to sample several flavours without adding to their nicotine intake."

    I appologise for liking your e-book to a school report it was a little harsh of me ;) I'm sure when it is finished it will be very useful to necomers but I do think you need to do more research - nearly all current information on e-smoking (tips & tricks included) can be found on the pages of this forum - keep up the good work :thumb:
     

    NathanS

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    Thanks for all the input, i will change it so there is no health claim.

    I know lots of tips and tricks can be found on this forum but I don't want to just copy what other people have said. I was hoping people have have posted good tips or tricks would send them to me and give me permision in include them in my e-book. I noone send me anything i probably will just looks for stuff posted on the forum.

    Do you huys think i have left anything out that a newbie would want to know?
     
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