I see where you were going with this, but quit watching about 1/3 way
through. The video is dark (each item you show looks like a black blob). Grainy - most likely due to the camera trying to adjust for the lack of light. The info I got by the time I gave up could have been relayed in the same time it took to watch the drawn out intro. "Here is the Janty stick I received, it comes with mains charger, US adapter,
batteries, and 2 510 atomizers (or whatever)" is much more watchable then "Picture of you holding item" wait wait wait title -"
batteries" wait wait wait "Next picture" wait wait title - "charger" etc. etc. etc. The drum loop got old after the 3rd time it restarted.
Add some lights, shorten your intro, and tell me about the product... and if you are going to use a loop, get into fruity loops or some other program, and chain a few together to make it interesting.
Of course this is just my 2 cents, and you can take it or leave it. Best of luck.