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LOL, you beat me to it. I was just thinking of doing that right now.
Thanks.
You made me realize that the mention of nicotine is not really on there. If somebody did need to call a doctor, 24mg/ml means nothing. 24mg of nicotine per milliliter means a lot more. The size was bigger than the strength, simply because there is a difference in the amount of characters, but that should be fixed to show nicotine strength. I'll revamp when I get home from work.
I'm not techie enough to design a label, but since this is called "Bloogplanet" which is different from earth, maybe the name should reflect that. Something like "Solar Liquid" or "Galaxi Vapor", I personally like "Moon juice".
Yes, but the only moon that is called Moon is the Earth's moon. All others have a unique name.
In this case, the planet Bloog has no moon, though it is the fourth planet in its solar system and is inhabited by the pingkasloths, which oddly do not resemble earth-type sloths. Unfortunately, that is all we know of the planet at this time as the paranoid (and girlfriendless) friend has been unwilling to share more with the community.
In this case, the planet Bloog has no moon, though it is the fourth planet in its solar system and is inhabited by the pingkasloths, which oddly do not resemble earth-type sloths. Unfortunately, that is all we know of the planet at this time as the paranoid (and girlfriendless) friend has been unwilling to share more with the community.
Here's what I came up with, though I'm not sure I like it as much as I like Freaky's designs.
OMG that was funny about the planet Bloog, I need to check that site again 
and an interesting observation about our moon... never thought about that before.
and an interesting observation about our moon... never thought about that before.
Man, I just got onto my computer. Busy day . . . can't alter quite yet. Of course though, anything can be slightly modified per order.
Like the drop in the water Rift!
Like the drop in the water Rift!
Here is one of my ideas. Provided I have enough time I have one possibly two more tumbling around.
IF i may give you some advice i just want to point out this label is unbalanced. there is to much going on in the right of the picture, as a graphic designer well a student studying graphic design which does labeling and logos for products the best thing to do is balance the image. There is a quick fix for this to help better your chances of winning; I probably would keep the word bloog centered like you have it. Instead i would move fusion to the left of the water drop and liquid on the right to even things out and possibly make them the same size and font. everything else looks nice. I like the way you did the flavors.
In my design I am just trying to keep it simple and have the bloog logo as the center piece and have the info to the side in regular text so it will be easier for the printers. I just hope that's what bloog will be thinking too. save money. So bloog if you are wanting to change the colors let me know. I'm trying to make a career out of this
i guess we will see if schools paying off or not.IF i may give you some advice i just want to point out this label is unbalanced. there is to much going on in the right of the picture, as a graphic designer well a student studying graphic design which does labeling and logos for products the best thing to do is balance the image. There is a quick fix for this to help better your chances of winning; I probably would keep the word bloog centered like you have it. Instead i would move fusion to the left of the water drop and liquid on the right to even things out and possibly make them the same size and font. everything else looks nice. I like the way you did the flavors.
In my design I am just trying to keep it simple and have the bloog logo as the center piece and have the info to the side in regular text so it will be easier for the printers. I just hope that's what bloog will be thinking too. save money. So bloog if you are wanting to change the colors let me know. I'm trying to make a career out of this
Hey there thanks for the critique, I always welcome and encourage it! I'm actually a 3d animator by trade myself and dable in a bout a million other things currently teaching myself CNC fabrication to use with my robotics work.
I originally had the logo exactly the way you described it with Fusion on one side and Liquid on the other. But my issue was exactly that it was too balanced. My intent with the positioning of the words like they are, was precisely to throw things off balance a little. But just enough to not throw the whole thing out of whack. Remember this will likely (depending on Bloogs bottle choice) be curved around the bottle. That and the fact that people generally scan from left to right lead to my decision on its current position. Not to mention for me it flows better that way. This of course was my own design choice and if Bloog wanted to change it then they would most certainly be able to get it changed.
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OK, I don't really have time to properly adjust everything. I just moved things around quickly.
This label has just the one (greyish) color, and no printed quantities, amounts, dates, etc. This label would cover all juice flavors and sizes in one printing. Flavor, size, strength, and date would all be written by hand.
This label has just the one (greyish) color, and no printed quantities, amounts, dates, etc. This label would cover all juice flavors and sizes in one printing. Flavor, size, strength, and date would all be written by hand.
I love it; Bloog in-jokes. It made me smile to remember Leaford's mischief.
Do we have any idea how much longer this contest will run? I won't have more time to work on a new design until Thursday night. Just wondering if I will have until then or not.
Yeah, slim, that site cracked me up. Their reaction to Leaford's intrusion was priceless.
Here is mine with the words centered. I dono for me it just doesn't flow as well. But that's just me.
for direct comparison to the other one
Also this image has the droplet directly in the center as opposed to the one on page 7 of this post.
for direct comparison to the other one
Also this image has the droplet directly in the center as opposed to the one on page 7 of this post.
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I like that Rift and agree about the words, perhaps have Fusion and Liquid just the outline of the letters?
Shhhhhh. I was thinking about that last night before I went to bed. Started it this morning. Don't let anybody know though. ;^)
Seriously, I was just thinking who would buy the Nike Nike? Our newest truck on the market . . . it's the Ford Ford.
OK, I don't really have time to properly adjust everything. I just moved things around quickly.
This label has just the one (greyish) color, and no printed quantities, amounts, dates, etc. This label would cover all juice flavors and sizes in one printing. Flavor, size, strength, and date would all be written by hand.
Likey - Likey and the could even preprint some of their most common juice names ahead of time and only file in three things by hand
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