DIYFLAVORSHACK contest for Jan

[barefootgirl]

I didn't see the old site but this one looks great and love your story in the "About Us" section... You give off a very genuine and down to earth vibe. I always assumed you were strictly DIY and so I never went on your site but I see you also do pre mixed e liquids and have hardware too. Your "Expert for DIY Flavorshack" flavors sound yummy and I like how you state the ingredients used and those you avoid. Great job and congrats

 

[thehangdude]

#1
Hot Lava Flow

"cinnamin" should be "cinnamon"

 

[thehangdude]

#2
6 Pack of Shacks Flavors 1

"sizeslarger" should be "sizes larger"

 

[thehangdude]

#3
Mallomars E-Liquid

description reads "malamars", should be "mallomars"

 

[thehangdude]

#4
Marshmallow E-Liquid

"discribe" should be "describe"

 

[thehangdude]

#5
Juicy Peach E-Liquid

Description reads "Peach Very Peach just Juicy Peach"

I'm sorry, but huh?

 

[thehangdude]

#6
Raspberry E Liquid

"a all purpose" should be "an all purpose"

 

[thehangdude]

#7
Nutella E-Liquid

"nute" should be "nut" or "nutella" or...

 

[Criticalmass]

#1 Looks good, It seems the previous posters found the mistakes I also saw.

 

[Train2]

Another little fix - on the "About Us" page:

"We are LOOKING for Las Vegas Vapors for Get-Together vape PARTIES"

I think it should say you're looking for vapers. Vapors are what we're vaping.

 

[therussellv]

Site looks great, didnt see any mistakes that haven't been mentioned

Last stinkie Oct. 15, 2013

 

[thehangdude]

#8
Cinnamon Eliquid

"cinnamin" should be "cinnamon"

 

[thehangdude]

#9
Butterscotch Almond Bars

"fo rme" should be "for me"

 

[thehangdude]

#10
Bit O Honey E-Liquid

"ssweet" should be "sweet"

 

[thehangdude]

#11
Ti Amo E-Liquid

"ambroshia" should be "ambrosia"

 

[thehangdude]

#12
Straberry Margarita E-Liquid


Liquid name and link page, "Strawberry" is spelled wrong.

Same here:
http://www.diyflavorshack.com/ProductDetails.asp?ProductCode=Stawberry+Mango++Mar+Eliquid

 

[thehangdude]

#13
Pretzels E-Liquid

"AANYONE" should be "ANYONE"

 

[thehangdude]

#14
Hawian Shack E-Liquid

Name should be "Hawaiian Shack e-liquid"
I know, it looks like too many vowels.

Also in description "pimeapple" should be "pineapple"

#14.5
http://www.diyflavorshack.com/ProductDetails.asp?ProductCode=Hawaii+5+O+++E-Liquid

Again "pimeapple" should be "pineapple"

 

[thehangdude]

#15
Elvis Prestley E-Liquid

Name should be Presley, not Prestley.

 

[thehangdude]

#16
Pomegranate Surprise E Liquid

"lov e" should be "love"

OK, this has really helped my OCD. Thanks Dawn! I might be back for more.
I did notice several places that need punctuation and some capital letter errors.

The basic site looks very good! And easy to negotiate!