so when does the wiki page editing start?
mike
Right now:
Electronic cigarette - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Wikipedia said:An electronic cigarette (e-cig or e-cigarette), personal vaporizer (PV) or electronic nicotine delivery system (ENDS) is a battery-powered vaporizer that simulates the feeling of smoking, but without the tobacco combustion.[1] The user automatically activates the e-cigarette by taking a puff;[2]other devices turn on by pressing a button manually.[3] They are often cylindrical, with many variations.[4] Their use is commonly called vaping.[5] Some e-cigarettes look like traditional cigarettes, but others do not.[6] There are disposable and reusable versions.[7] Instead of cigarette smoke, the user inhales anaerosol, commonly called vapor.[8] E-cigarettes typically have a heating element that atomizes a liquid solution known as e-liquid.[9] E-liquids usually contain propylene glycol, glycerin, water, nicotine, andflavorings.[10] E-liquids are also sold without propylene glycol, without nicotine, or without flavors.[11][12][13]
The benefits and health risks of electronic cigarettes are uncertain.[7][14] There is no evidence they are better than regulated medication for quitting smoking,[14] but there is tentative evidence of benefit as asmoking cessation aid.[13] Their usefulness in tobacco harm reduction is unclear,[15] but in an effort todecrease tobacco related death and disease, they have a potential to be part of the strategy.[16] Their safety risk is like that of smokeless tobacco.[17] US Food and Drug Administration (FDA)-approved products, such as nicotine inhalers, are probably safer than e-cigarettes.[15] Limited evidence suggests e-cigarettes are safer than tobacco,[18] but high voltage (5.0 V) e-cigarettes may generateformaldehyde agents at a greater level than smoking, which was determined to be a lifetime cancer risk of about 5 to 15 times greater than long-term smoking.[10]
Non-smokers who use them risk nicotine addiction.[19] There is no evidence e-cigarettes are regularly used by those who have never smoked.[20] E-cigarette use may delay or deter quitting smoking.[4] E-cigarettes create vapor that consists of ultrafine particles.[4] The vapor contains similar chemicals to the e-liquid, together with tiny amounts of toxicants and heavy metals.[4][20] Exactly what comprises the vapor varies across and within manufacturers.[8] E-cigarette vapor contains fewer toxic substances than cigarette smoke,[4] and is probably less harmful to users and bystanders.[4][20] No serious adverse effects from e-cigarettes have been reported in trials.[13] Less serious adverse effects include throat and mouth inflammation, vomiting, nausea, and cough.[4] The long-term effects of e-cigarette use are unknown.[2][21]
Since their introduction to the market in 2004, global usage has risen.[22] As of 2012, up to 10% of American high school students had used them at least once, and around 3.4% of American adults as of 2011.[23] In the UK user numbers have increased from 700,000 in 2012 to 2.1 million in 2013. About 60% of UK users are smokers and most others are ex-smokers.[24] Most e-cigarette users still smoke traditional cigarettes.[4] Most peoples' reason for using e-cigarettes is related to quitting, but a considerable proportion use them recreationally.[2] The modern e-cigarette arose from a 2003 invention by Hon Lik in China[25] and as of 2014 most devices are made there.[4] Because of the potential relationship with tobacco laws and medical drug policies, electronic cigarette legislation is being debated in many countries.[26][27] TheEuropean Parliament passed regulations in February 2014 standardizing liquids and personal vaporizers, listing ingredients, and child-proofing liquid containers.[28] The US FDA published proposed regulations in April 2014 with some similar measures.[29] Manufacturers have increased advertising, using marketing techniques like those used to sell cigarettes in the 1950s and 1960s.[4] As of 2014 there were 466 brands with sale of around $7 billion.[30][31]
So here's "the thing" right here. What we're all talking about. I need to spend the next several days going back through this thread and clicking all those links and reading all those references in order to get up to speed on topic of Vaping, etc... so I figured I would drop the actual text of the Article's Lede (as it currently is) into this thread and let people start giving it some consideration in the concrete (vs. the theoretical) sense.
What things are bad and what things are good?
What is in there that should stay, what should be modified and what should be thrown out of the a) Lede, b) article completely?
What is "junk science", has been "debunked"?
If you define the Lede as "The introductory passage to an article that should inform the Reader and invite them to continue reading the entire Article." (as I do) how can the Lede (this 4 paragraphs) be improved to better achieve that goal, with particular emphasis on the word "invite". My personal mission the reason why I choose to do this project, is to make the article as "inviting" as possible. As an Editor, I am never going to acquire the expertise of any topic to be willing to trade punches and stand toe-to-toe with experienced Wikipedia Editors that may be editing articles that are actually in their (career) field. Not going to win an argument with a doctor on the health effects of nicotine. Not going to even try.
However, I CAN make that doctor acknowledge the fact that 99% of the population do not operate has his/her "level" and so his advanced-level awareness should not be in the 1st 4 paragraphs of this (or any other) article.
So anyways, this is my mission. To provide a high-quality, accurate, unbiased, and inviting introduction to the topic of "e-cigarettes".
Other thoughts:
Given that Vaping Devices are probably going to be used to deliver more than just nicotine (medicine and probably illegal substances at some point), I think it is a mistake to over-emphasize these devices, and the activity of "vaping" too closely with cigarettes, tobacco use and smoking. Some connection is unavoidable, but IMO there should be a nod of acknowledgment, a "touch gloves" moment where the article makes light reference to smoking and then from that part treats the topic of Vaping, Vaporizers, and the culture surrounding them both with the "standalone" level of respect it deserves.
While it may be true that this could be construed as "bias" (as Wikipedia defines it), it is also true that it could be considered to be equally biased to "advocate" (for political reasons) in favor of a false and artificial relationship between vaping and smoking, vaping devices and cigarettes. The two arguments off-set each other. So, it is my position that arguing in favor of creating as large a separation between vaping and smoking is NOT "bias", it's just honestly presenting the truth in the best manner possible, as over-emphasis on the commonalities between vaping and smoking serve no constructive purpose, but instead confuse the two and fosters an environment of hostility.
Which, in the larger sense, to those concerned about the agenda of larger, unseen, global, "Big Tobacco" (Pharma, Charity, State, etc...) creating an environment where helpful, well-intentioned people spend their time fighting over inconsequential details instead of presenting high-quality information to interested readers, serves the evil purposes of these larger entities without them having to lift a finger or spend a dime.
Which, as I think of it, goes towards my misgivings with regard to the use of "ANZT" as it demonizes two groups and consolidates them. People are are "anti-nicotine" and people who are "anti-tobacco" are both grouped into the same demonized category, yet from the pro-vaping perspective, being "anti-tobacco" is a GOOD thing. Makes no sense to me to be anti-tobacco, and take up vaping, and then demonize people who are anti-tobacco in the same category as people who are merely, simply "anti-nicotine". I think, in terms of Vaping Advocacy, that it's a critical error to do this. A significant percentage of the Anti-Tobacco people are natural allies to the Vaping advocates. Why put effort into turning allies into enemies? Seems stupid to me. Correct me if I'm wrong.
Anyways, that's the bit. We've seen a lot of talk about the article, the editors, the organization, who "they" are and the things "they" do, etc... and now here's the article itself, submitted for your consideration and criticism.
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