HAPPY VALENTINES DAY- From Diyflavorshack

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john doe

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there once was a girl from nantucket.
whoops, can't use that one.
Collect Telegram from a Mad Dog
by Hunter S. Thompson

Not being a poet, and drunk as well,
leaning into the diner and dawn
and hearing a juke box mockery of some better
human sound
I wanted rhetoric
but could only howl the rotten truth
Norman Luboff
should have his nuts ripped off with a plastic fork.
Then howled around like a man with the
final angst,
not knowing what I wanted there
Probably the waitress, bend her double
like a safety pin,
Deposit the mad seed before they
tie off my tubes
. . .

Suddenly a man with wild eyes rushed
out from the wooden toilet
Foam on his face and waving a razor
like a flag, shouting
. . .
We'll take our vengeance now!
. . .

We rang for Luboff
on the pay phone, but there was
no contact
. . .

Get a Lawyer, I said. These swine have gone
far enough.
Now is the time to
lay a writ on them,
Cease and Desist
. . .

The legal man agreed
We had a case and indeed a duty to
Right these Wrongs, as it were
The Price would be four thousand in front and
ten for the nut.
I wrote him a check on the Sawtooth
National Bank,
but he hooted at it
While rubbing a special oil on
his palms
To keep the chancres from itching
beyond endurance
On this Sabbath.
. . .
Later, from jail
I sent a brace of telegrams
to the right people,
explaining my position.

October 13, 1965
 

GrimmGreen

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hope you have a great day Dawn :)

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VictoryNotVengence

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I usually don't rhyme alot when i write poetry.

snuffing out the last real marlboro
existance has changed
american lungs drowning in tacky glue

electronic ciggarette
exhaled clouds dance cold wisps about my face
blurring out my vision

dead blackend tounge sticking out from a confused face.
hundereds of flavors to try. hundreds of dollars spent.
all nothing
bland tastless nothing

DIY Flavorshack. Double Flavor Bliss.
Apple ignites spicy fireworks in my mouth
Dark chocolate in white plumes out

DIY Flavorshack - don't live in a tastless world vape dawn juice.
 
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