Honestly, didn't notice the archive links. That does change things for what I was getting at.
Yet, still think there ought to be another page for electronic cigarettes that deals with controversy as that is present on the article page. The introductory paragraphs of ecig article are not what I see on other article pages on Wikipedia.
Almost everything after: "The benefits and risks of electronic cigarette use are uncertain" is representative of the controversy either in society or found on the talk page.
On the 'Jesus' page, there isn't language in the lede that shows up as maybe or likely. I'm guessing on most other controversial topics it isn't written this way. A word search on "may" doesn't appear in the 'Jesus' lede, but appears 4 times in one on eCigs. Example, "Electronic cigarettes may carry a risk of addiction in those who do not already smoke" has very little to do with WHAT an electronic cigarette is, and everything to do with controversy surrounding eCigs. On the Global Warming article page, the word 'may' never shows up in the lede. Yet, Global Warming topic does have it's own "Global Warming Controversy" article page because the whole "maybe" aspect does come up in that debate often but isn't (apparently) seen as necessary on the main article page.
So, while I now realize I was mistaken on the ridiculous length of the talk page, I do not feel I am mistaken about the controversy from the talk page spilling onto the article page and is not found on some other pages (at least in their ledes). Therefore, my suggestion that a split occur and that sort of language be removed from the main article page is warranted, I think. And if people on the talk page make that decision, then great. The sooner, the better. But, I thought to try Wikipedia 'contact us' first as I'm not participant on the talk page nor care to be because it is obvious that two (or more) agendas are butting heads and settling very little, so far. Am glad to provide the info that precedes the 'contact us' to explain why I chose to go that route as I do think it is warranted to try that when one is not a participant on the talk page.
Let me start by saying that the article, as it stands right now, is a complete and utter mess, there is no question about that, every editor agrees on that.
Now let me agree and disagree with you on a few points.
Number one, Wikipedia will most likely ignore the message you've sent them via "contact us" or will direct you to the talk page of the article if you have issues with it, which I highly encourage you to do, you'd be surprise, you can really make a difference. The small staff of Wikipedia do not have time to respond to every users that have a problem with one of the millions of articles they host. Wikipedia does not write articles, people like you and me are the authors of Wikipedia.
Number two; I absolutely agree with you that the lede is ridiculously focused on health and the unknown effects of ecigs rather than on what these devices actually are, even the ordering of the article i.e. having the Health section coming before the Construction section is a problem. There is a huge debate that has not yet been resolved as of how to classify the article; is it a medical article or a consumer product article? Answering this question is very hard because some members of the medical community of Wikipedia pushes really hard to have it classified as a medical article, whereas people on our side are pushing back to have it classified as a consumer product article (as it should be). Solving this will dictate the ordering of the lede and of the sections. See this section of the talk page ; Sections Reorder Proposal
Number three; because of the amount of contradicting information within the scientific community about the device, it is impossible to make objective medical and scientific claims that are free of words like "may be" "evidence suggests" "uncertain" while using sources that are considered reliable; see WP:RS. Only time will solve this problem as more and more research will be made available. There is no way of circumventing that right now without violating Wikipedia NPOV policy. The Global Warming article doesn't have this kind of wording because there is no real controversy about the subject within the scientific literature and there are tons of reliable source to back up the claims, the controversy has been created by outside (mostly political and industrial) actors, on the other hand there is a very real scientific controversy about ecigs.
The fact remains, Vaping is a controversial subject among experts and non experts and it is normal that the article reflects that. We are pushing to have a Controversy section; see Proposed new "Controversy" section.
Yes... right now... the article's a mess. Let's try to fix it.
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