I'm battling some ANTZ from Cali with edits to the wikipedia page on e-cigs

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Honestly, didn't notice the archive links. That does change things for what I was getting at.

Yet, still think there ought to be another page for electronic cigarettes that deals with controversy as that is present on the article page. The introductory paragraphs of ecig article are not what I see on other article pages on Wikipedia.

Almost everything after: "The benefits and risks of electronic cigarette use are uncertain" is representative of the controversy either in society or found on the talk page.

On the 'Jesus' page, there isn't language in the lede that shows up as maybe or likely. I'm guessing on most other controversial topics it isn't written this way. A word search on "may" doesn't appear in the 'Jesus' lede, but appears 4 times in one on eCigs. Example, "Electronic cigarettes may carry a risk of addiction in those who do not already smoke" has very little to do with WHAT an electronic cigarette is, and everything to do with controversy surrounding eCigs. On the Global Warming article page, the word 'may' never shows up in the lede. Yet, Global Warming topic does have it's own "Global Warming Controversy" article page because the whole "maybe" aspect does come up in that debate often but isn't (apparently) seen as necessary on the main article page.

So, while I now realize I was mistaken on the ridiculous length of the talk page, I do not feel I am mistaken about the controversy from the talk page spilling onto the article page and is not found on some other pages (at least in their ledes). Therefore, my suggestion that a split occur and that sort of language be removed from the main article page is warranted, I think. And if people on the talk page make that decision, then great. The sooner, the better. But, I thought to try Wikipedia 'contact us' first as I'm not participant on the talk page nor care to be because it is obvious that two (or more) agendas are butting heads and settling very little, so far. Am glad to provide the info that precedes the 'contact us' to explain why I chose to go that route as I do think it is warranted to try that when one is not a participant on the talk page.

Let me start by saying that the article, as it stands right now, is a complete and utter mess, there is no question about that, every editor agrees on that.

Now let me agree and disagree with you on a few points.

Number one, Wikipedia will most likely ignore the message you've sent them via "contact us" or will direct you to the talk page of the article if you have issues with it, which I highly encourage you to do, you'd be surprise, you can really make a difference. The small staff of Wikipedia do not have time to respond to every users that have a problem with one of the millions of articles they host. Wikipedia does not write articles, people like you and me are the authors of Wikipedia.

Number two; I absolutely agree with you that the lede is ridiculously focused on health and the unknown effects of ecigs rather than on what these devices actually are, even the ordering of the article i.e. having the Health section coming before the Construction section is a problem. There is a huge debate that has not yet been resolved as of how to classify the article; is it a medical article or a consumer product article? Answering this question is very hard because some members of the medical community of Wikipedia pushes really hard to have it classified as a medical article, whereas people on our side are pushing back to have it classified as a consumer product article (as it should be). Solving this will dictate the ordering of the lede and of the sections. See this section of the talk page ; Sections Reorder Proposal

Number three; because of the amount of contradicting information within the scientific community about the device, it is impossible to make objective medical and scientific claims that are free of words like "may be" "evidence suggests" "uncertain" while using sources that are considered reliable; see WP:RS. Only time will solve this problem as more and more research will be made available. There is no way of circumventing that right now without violating Wikipedia NPOV policy. The Global Warming article doesn't have this kind of wording because there is no real controversy about the subject within the scientific literature and there are tons of reliable source to back up the claims, the controversy has been created by outside (mostly political and industrial) actors, on the other hand there is a very real scientific controversy about ecigs.

The fact remains, Vaping is a controversial subject among experts and non experts and it is normal that the article reflects that. We are pushing to have a Controversy section; see Proposed new "Controversy" section.

Yes... right now... the article's a mess. Let's try to fix it.
 
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Let me start by saying that the article, as it stands right now, is a complete and utter mess, there is no question about that, every editor agrees on that.

It helps, a lot, that you started off with this.

Now let me agree and disagree with you on a few points.

Number one, Wikipedia will most likely ignore the message you've sent them via "contact us" or will direct you to the talk page of the article if you have issues with it, which I highly encourage you to do, you'd be surprise, you can really make a difference. The small staff of Wikipedia do not have time to respond to every users that have a problem with one of the millions of articles they host. Wikipedia does not write articles, people like you and me are the authors of Wikipedia.

I may take you up on this because of the bolded part. I get how editing works (I think) and yet it seems so messy that I don't feel like I'd make a difference. I would tell you, as I don't think it is a secret or anything, that I'd be coming into the talk-discussion with chief intent to split things off the eCig main article page. If that was highly resisted, it would likely lead me to feeling like, 'not able to make a difference.'

Number two; I absolutely agree with you that the lede is ridiculously focused on health and the unknown effects of ecigs rather than on what these devices actually are, even the ordering of the article i.e. having the Health section coming before the Construction section is a problem. There is a huge debate that has not yet been resolved as of how to classify the article; is it a medical article or a consumer product article? Answering this question is very hard because some members of the medical community of Wikipedia pushes really hard to have it classified as a medical article, whereas people on our side are pushing back to have it classified as a consumer product article (as it should be). Solving this will dictate the ordering of the lede and of the sections. See this section of the talk page ; Sections Reorder Proposal

I would like to understand why it can't be both, but be distinct. Have the medical article. Throw in all the stuff that we vapers know to be lots of junk science but is deemed 'authority' by the various medical establishments. I get that some people feel that needs to be conveyed about eCigs. But don't get why the page about eCigs needs to include all that as the main article is, to me, about WHAT an eCig is (and the various components, styles, etc.) while the other stuff is about perceived usage and/or place within society.

This is how I would approach the discussion and if I don't do the talk-editing, I would be convinced that this is a ridiculous mess that is making Wikipedia show up rather poorly on organizing content.

Number three; because of the amount of contradicting information within the scientific community about the device, it is impossible to make objective medical and scientific claims that are free of words like "may be" "evidence suggests" "uncertain" while using sources that are considered reliable; see WP:RS. Only time will solve this problem as more and more research will be made available. There is no way of circumventing that right now without violating Wikipedia NPOV policy. The Global Warming article doesn't have this kind of wording because there is no real controversy about the subject within the scientific literature and there are tons of reliable source to back up the claims, the controversy has been created by outside (mostly political and industrial) actors, on the other hand there is a very real scientific controversy about ecigs.

I disagree that Global Warming article doesn't have real controversy. Also disagree from earlier assertion you stated that smoking article is without controversy. It clearly is. The smoking one is actually worse than the eCig one, but for reasons I don't necessarily feel like getting into, at least in detail. To make the point short, with global warming main article, everything is 'backed up,' by constantly stating, 'according to scientific consensus' or attributions to scientific literature/bodies, where as eCigs are written with the whole POV thing trying to put forth what is clearly agenda on the 'what is an eCig' main article page. And by "trying to put forth", I mean via the language that is used as science doesn't really know. Yet, for some, that is enough to include it as if science has weighed in in some definitive way. I find that ridiculous and yet am okay if that is conveyed, but just don't see it as being necessary on same page as 'what' is this we are talking about. Given what shows up to me right now as inherent bias of Wikipedia, I'd compromise/settle for the health one being 'main page' and another one being written that is free of that.

The fact remains, Vaping is a controversial subject among experts and non experts and it is normal that the article reflects that. We are pushing to have a Controversy section; see Proposed new "Controversy" section.

Yes... right now... the article's a mess. Let's try to fix it.

Your words have certainly inspired me to consider joining the battle and fighting the good fight, but would appreciate just a little more guidance given the approach I've conveyed here.
 

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I would like to understand why it can't be both, but be distinct. Have the medical article. Throw in all the stuff that we vapers know to be lots of junk science but is deemed 'authority' by the various medical establishments. I get that some people feel that needs to be conveyed about eCigs. But don't get why the page about eCigs needs to include all that as the main article is, to me, about WHAT an eCig is (and the various components, styles, etc.) while the other stuff is about perceived usage and/or place within society.
The reason is that medical articles have their own style on wikipedia, the organization of sections is different than regular articles and emphasis on health related claims is stronger. Finding reliable source for medical article is much harder to. For example; let's say that you are editing the Ebola article; you cannot point to a New York times article that says something about ebola to support your ebola claims. Even better, you cannot even point to a single scientific study about ebola, it will not be good enough, you need to use what is called secondary sources `(review articles) that compounds all the scientific literature of multiple studies into one cohesive text.

By the way, we just had a small victory today! The health section is no longer the first section, the article is no longer classified as a medical article (it never really was but it was treated as such).

But we still have to use secondary sources when making any health or scientific claims.... You can't just point to a farsalinos study and say "See!!! Told ya" You have to find a review article that cites farsalinos studies to be considered reliable. It seems weird, but it makes sense. If you could do that... they could simply point at a Stanton Glantz study and say: "Well in your face"

The secondary source requirement is the best way to gather neutral point of view scientific literature... Although there is the crappy Grana/Glantz review article that our ANTZ friends love to point at.

I disagree that Global Warming article doesn't have real controversy. Also disagree from earlier assertion you stated that smoking article is without controversy. It clearly is. The smoking one is actually worse than the eCig one, but for reasons I don't necessarily feel like getting into, at least in detail. To make the point short, with global warming main article, everything is 'backed up,' by constantly stating, 'according to scientific consensus' or attributions to scientific literature/bodies, where as eCigs are written with the whole POV thing trying to put forth what is clearly agenda on the 'what is an eCig' main article page. And by "trying to put forth", I mean via the language that is used as science doesn't really know. Yet, for some, that is enough to include it as if science has weighed in in some definitive way. I find that ridiculous and yet am okay if that is conveyed, but just don't see it as being necessary on same page as 'what' is this we are talking about. Given what shows up to me right now as inherent bias of Wikipedia, I'd compromise/settle for the health one being 'main page' and another one being written that is free of that.
Yes... there is a real controversy about global warming... Just not a scientific one. And since climate change is a scientific issue, we need scientific sources to back up the claims. Good luck trying find reliable sources that says otherwise on that particular article, just try making the point that climate change is not man made, they will eat you alive.... And rightfully so, the science is just not there to back you up. I do not want to debate climate change here... I'm just saying.

I don't remember saying that the smoking article is without controversy. If I said that, I spoke out of my ...., I didn't read, nor am I interested in the Smoking article.

To come back to the ecig article... We had a lot of victories over the ANTZ claiming outrageous things. At one point, the article was claiming that vaping was worse than smoking.... Now at least the article says something like "all the evidence seems to say that vaping is better than smoking". I'm telling you, Farsalinos is right, a lot of the researchers are uneducated in this new field of research, there is very poor quality scientific papers out there that unfortunately passes every Wikipedia reliable source criteria. Highly respected medical journals publish bad science right now when it comes to e-cigs, giving the ANTZ ammo that they can use to steer the article their way... But on the other hand, they publish very good ones to (Thank God for Farsalinos and a few others!!!!) . But all of this is temporary anyways, this is a new field of research, once the scientist will truly understand the field of vaping the research will yield accurate results, the low quality is to be expected right now.

If you decide to jump in, which every one here should.... Just don't be a troll and don;t be insulted when other experienced contributors tells you that it does not work the way you think it works, just learn as you go, Wikipedia has alot of "rules" that seems strange at first but actually really make a lot of sense. I would advise against jumping in and making, right off the bat, massive restructuring of the article without being comfortable with Wikipedia's policies and environment.

Take your time, make small contributions and edits at first, participate in the talk page, there is a very large and very well organized community over there and a lot of them are willing to help you. I won't lie.. it can be very frustrating... but very satisfying at the same time when you manage to get your point across.

The e-cig article is a very hardcore way to learn wikipedia due to the nature of this controversial article.

And to anyone that actually read through this TL;DR post, just remember that, when John Doe types "Electronic cigarette" in google, the Wikipedia article is one of the first result that pops up... It is in our interest to make it better.

Just create an account and make yourself heard.

Wikipedia Introduction to new contributors <----- Click the link
 
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If you decide to jump in, which every one here should.... Just don't be a troll and don;t be insulted when other experienced contributors tells you that it does not work the way you think it works, just learn as you go, Wikipedia has alot of "rules" that seems strange at first but actually really make a lot of sense. I would advise against jumping in and making, right off the bat, massive restructuring of the article without being comfortable with Wikipedia's policies and environment.

Take your time, make small contributions and edits at first, participate in the talk page, there is a very large and very well organized community over there and a lot of them are willing to help you. I won't lie.. it can be very frustrating... but very satisfying at the same time when you manage to get your point across.

I skimmed most of what you wrote here because I don't feel like you addressed what I was getting at. And is why to this moment, I feel it was wise to write Wikipedia foundation, despite your opinions on how ineffective that course will be.

I recognize that I would come into article editing with bias/agenda, and am fairly certain all other editors on the talk page have that going on, have an agenda. Also pretty sure none are being forthright with what that agenda is. I think most, if not all, editors on the talk page get how editing works on Wikipedia. I feel I do. The whole debate about 'which scientific data is most appropriate where,' is not my chief concern for entering that discussion. I've expressed numerous times on this thread what my chief concern is. You've said the article is a mess. So, again, I tell you that if I came into discussion page, my agenda as editor on that page, which differs from my agenda as a vaping enthusiast, would be to split out the uncertain medical / scientific data from all the stuff that describes what an eCig is (along with components, materials, styles, etc.).

I currently see the small little battles being fought as the other side's agenda purposively being employed as a distraction to keep the 'what is an eCig' information from being conveyed without 'extreme warnings' for anyone curious to check out the eCig article. Which, I think, is representative of the larger debate in society. Everyone on our side that may be compelled to note something on wikipedia about vaping saving lives and/or being wonderful for smoking cessation are people I think are not being helpful to what is the mess on the wikipedia page. I would not care about that sort of agenda on that type of informational page, and so none of my edits or talk about possible edits would be coming from that angle.

If the science were a little more certain on eCigs, I would advocate for article editing that it be worded in the article to reflect the source and not just added with footnoting. As in, "according to WHO, electronic cigarettes are dangerous." Rather than, "electronic cigarettes are dangerous(1)." With the (1) being footnote article to WHO as secondary source to establish that claim. That the page instead chooses to go with the "may be dangerous" or "likely has dangerous elements" is key part of the mess that is observable on that page, and IMO, needs to be put on a whole other main article page where that is allowed to roam as freely as editors on that talk page for that article wish it to be. But the one that explains what an eCig is and all the variations for what makes for an eCig, I feel strongly needs to be a distinct article from the medical one.

If you, who are fighting the good fight, think it could work as one big article where it is a hodge podge of ANTZ agenda mixed in with vaping enthusiast agenda, as is the case now, then I do not have desire to get in there an participate only at that level. I consider that a very disorganized content article and see it as a fight that is not worth having as Wikipedia currently strikes me as having an agenda, and not worthy of having donations sent its way as long as it remains that disorganized.

Global warming controversy is (partially) scientific, as is the cigarette one. On both those topics, in context of Wikipedia editing, I would not seek to insert my agenda/bias on the pages that are meant to describe what this topic is about.
 

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As a side note of sorts, on the Passive Smoking wiki article, I challenged the statement in lede that read: Exposure to second-hand tobacco smoke causes disease, disability, and death.

The bolded word is linked to "epidemiology" main article page with anchor on "causal inference."

My challenge was based partially on my personal agenda (which I know I'm not alone in) but mostly on how Wikipedia specifically chose to link to that page to assert credibility for "causes." I explained how it was incorrect to go with that term based on the linked information. I noticed in archive talk pages this had been debated exhaustively, and the "causes" side felt it was indisputable.

Today, I noticed that due to my suggestion for the change, and argument I put forth, another editor changed it to read, more appropriately: Exposure to second-hand tobacco smoke can cause disease, disability, and death.

I would call that a nice little victory that is clearly in line with Wikipedia editing, or how things ought to work.

To try and tie this post back in with this thread's topic, if there were a page on 'vaping' or 'second-hand vaping,' I could see the 'may occur' type language on electronic cigarettes page being put there. But on the one that is about the device, I think it is clearly a travesty, for all to see right now, how poorly organized content can become when it is all put on one page with 2 sides butting heads.
 
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