I think a lighter home page would be easy on the eyes for us older folks and darken the white on the product page, still nice website!
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The site is very easy to navigate which is the most important part, but I think the twitter, facebook, and youtube icons, should be the standard ones. Though the way are now looks great with the site, they went unnoticed by me until about the fourth visit.
Also, though I do love the purple, the black is a bit depressing.
I'm looking forward to more inventory and will check back often
Also, though I do love the purple, the black is a bit depressing.
I'm looking forward to more inventory and will check back often
Everyone,
Thank you all! The feedback received about the site has touched on virtually all aspects of the website from fonts to nicotine strength, colors and graphics and even hard to notice grammatical errors and much more.
This information is already so useful that we're deciding to close this thread and contest when the reply count hits 150! (so keep the replies coming)
A winner will be announced shortly after the thread closes and will be posted right in the thread as well as being contacted via PM for a proper shipping address.
We'll be starting up a new contest right away as well so stay tuned for the next contests!
- John
Thank you all! The feedback received about the site has touched on virtually all aspects of the website from fonts to nicotine strength, colors and graphics and even hard to notice grammatical errors and much more.
This information is already so useful that we're deciding to close this thread and contest when the reply count hits 150! (so keep the replies coming)
A winner will be announced shortly after the thread closes and will be posted right in the thread as well as being contacted via PM for a proper shipping address.
We'll be starting up a new contest right away as well so stay tuned for the next contests!
- John
kritter,
Do you mean like mixing flavors or something else? What are your thoughts?
- John
maybe offering bottles, syringes, and plain pg and vg for folks that like to DIY.
The font of the contact section on the top right of your home page (with your phone # etc) is a litle tough to read...
The font of the contact section on the top right of your home page (with your phone # etc) is a litle tough to read...
John
Yes, flavors for mixing your own, maybe nic juice , pg, vg, pipettes, syringes, things of that sort.
Yes, flavors for mixing your own, maybe nic juice , pg, vg, pipettes, syringes, things of that sort.
yeah...
that font on the upper right ....contact info....
works a lot better ...so much easier to see
so are you "personally" building this site as we suggest things ?
that font on the upper right ....contact info....
works a lot better ...so much easier to see
so are you "personally" building this site as we suggest things ?
Font is much easier to read, and the Free Shipping Everyday is now prominent. I would change it to Free Shipping or Always Free Shipping, since you can't ship on Sunday.
You may want to add a few more keywords to your meta tags. eGo, ejuice, cartridges, cartomizers... The more the better. You may also want to hide some search words in your background. Where you have black space, use black text that will show up to the search engines.
Maybe add a mission statement. We will do our best to help people to find a cheap, healthier alternative to the 5000 chemicals...
Not sure what you can legally say, but its a thought.
Your website is looking very professional. The fact that you are willing to ask for criticism and try to improve says alot.
You may want to add a few more keywords to your meta tags. eGo, ejuice, cartridges, cartomizers... The more the better. You may also want to hide some search words in your background. Where you have black space, use black text that will show up to the search engines.
Maybe add a mission statement. We will do our best to help people to find a cheap, healthier alternative to the 5000 chemicals...
Not sure what you can legally say, but its a thought.
Your website is looking very professional. The fact that you are willing to ask for criticism and try to improve says alot.
Kelley,
I am making changes as the feedback comes in. There will be alot more than a store very soon. So keep checking!
- John
WOW>>>> I recently visited your site....before reading your post at ECF. Thought you were too good to be true. Prices are great !!
I would suggest you put more info on the first...home page. Maybe even a link to ECF with your nic. That will give you more legitimacy, as I was unsure the site was "real".
Thank you for the contest and I wish you success !!
I would suggest you put more info on the first...home page. Maybe even a link to ECF with your nic. That will give you more legitimacy, as I was unsure the site was "real".
Thank you for the contest and I wish you success !!
Wow I went and looked at the site this morning and it I looking great. The contact info looks great....I can actually read your number without my glasses. Nice color change when I chose a category on the left side. Once you fill "the black hole" on the front page it will be looking great!
Review of "the look"
I'm using the latest Firefox.
Upon first glance, your site is lovely. It has nice texture and interesting backgrounds.
Love the logo, it's gorgeous!
Some of your fonts on the purple headers are difficult to read as if misted over. I would like, I think, a more conventional font for greater visibility to announce that the thing on my left is indeed the contents of my shopping cart.
The light-grey lettering on the white toolbar under the header. (home, in the media, FAQ, etc) is a bit light for good visibility. darken a touch perhaps?
Love that your phone number is in big bold letters up top. Nice touch there.
Oh, and the aforementioned big black hole... definitely find ya something to stick in there.. its distracting.
Overall, very pretty. May need some functionality touchups to apppeal to those who don't see as well as I do.
That's all for now, and thanks for the contest.
<3
E.
I'm using the latest Firefox.
Upon first glance, your site is lovely. It has nice texture and interesting backgrounds.
Love the logo, it's gorgeous!
Some of your fonts on the purple headers are difficult to read as if misted over. I would like, I think, a more conventional font for greater visibility to announce that the thing on my left is indeed the contents of my shopping cart.
The light-grey lettering on the white toolbar under the header. (home, in the media, FAQ, etc) is a bit light for good visibility. darken a touch perhaps?
Love that your phone number is in big bold letters up top. Nice touch there.
Oh, and the aforementioned big black hole... definitely find ya something to stick in there.. its distracting.
Overall, very pretty. May need some functionality touchups to apppeal to those who don't see as well as I do.
That's all for now, and thanks for the contest.
<3
E.
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Instead of changing the background color of the actual pictures, you could change the background color of the pages themselves. Not too dark, or the contrast will be hard on the eyes, but dark enough to see the outline of the actual picture might help. I don't know if it would work, but it's worth a shot I think.
I think a giveaway of the ciggy styles would be nice. Some of us still like a ciggy style vape on occassion. I stuck with my plain old 510 for a year. Not everyone "upgrades".
I think a giveaway of the ciggy styles would be nice. Some of us still like a ciggy style vape on occassion.
I stuck with my plain old 510 for a year. Not everyone "upgrades".
I really like the site now, until I go to Checkout. https://www.majorsmoke.com/cart/checkout?redirected=1
There are broken links and text and basic confusion on that page. Is that because I have not signed in? Is that because you haven't received a merchant account yet?
Can't wait until you get more choices. Your prices look fair, and free shipping is a major plus. Maybe you can find a juice vendor in your area and pimp their flavors.
Fill in the front page 'black' area, and you are set.
There are broken links and text and basic confusion on that page. Is that because I have not signed in? Is that because you haven't received a merchant account yet?
Can't wait until you get more choices. Your prices look fair, and free shipping is a major plus. Maybe you can find a juice vendor in your area and pimp their flavors.
Fill in the front page 'black' area, and you are set.
Hangdude,
Thanks for the feedback. If you'd be up for it, I'd like to get more details about your experience. PM me when you get a chance. Orders are coming through from the site and payments via credit cards are being processed.
Thanks in advance!
- John
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