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seraphicdragon

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What is missing?

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PittBoss

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I would personally like to see maybe actual pics of the balls and books.. and the rest of the stuff maybe hazy or even more "squibbley" drawn out. Like the perception of Willy's mind.. I like the overall impression that you left (quite similar to what I described), just maybe more contrast. Are you designing for the overall feel of the movie or Biff (from what the pic is seeming to me)?
 

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I would personally like to see maybe actual pics of the balls and books.. and the rest of the stuff maybe hazy or even more "squibbley" drawn out. Like the perception of Willy's mind.. I like the overall impression that you left (quite similar to what I described), just maybe more contrast. Are you designing for the overall feel of the movie or Biff (from what the pic is seeming to me)?

i wanted it to look like a childs drawing with color pencil, the red, white and blue of the bed and the focus on biff like the story does is to show how willy idealized the american dream and doted on this one child thinking he is perfect the yet in focus i have all the stuff biff failed at or stole over time to show that his pefection is the allusion and his falts are the reality
 

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i wanted it to look like a childs drawing with color pencil, the red, white and blue of the bed and the focus on biff like the story does is to show how willy idealized the american dream and doted on this one child thinking he is perfect the yet in focus i have all the stuff biff failed at or stole over time to show that his pefection is the allusion and his falts are the reality

Yeah, I get and like that.. What if you add some sort of border that captures a sense of disillusionment? I dunno, I think I just feel there is something missing. I like where you went with it, just something seems to be missing..
 

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Yeah, I get and like that.. What if you add some sort of border that captures a sense of disillusionment? I dunno, I think I just feel there is something missing. I like where you went with it, just something seems to be missing..

i totally agree something is missing i will play around with a border see what i can figure out...
 

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Tough day at work today, buddy? The forum is also riding you already, as well I see..

I'm in no mood for some ()&-$&&($ forum to be $/$&:)$@ with me.....
Warren buffets little get together gives me a major pain. Wish the old fart would pack his bags and move the shiate to Florida......
 

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I'm in no mood for some ()&-$&&($ forum to be $/$&:)$@ with me.....
Warren buffets little get together gives me a major pain. Wish the old fart would pack his bags and move the shiate to Florida......

Nobody outside of his web wants him out of Omaha..

Sorry your day has been so rough, baby.. Wish I could make it better
 
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