Out of the Box-Oddysseus Transformer Rebuildable Tank Atomizer

[aeroforce156]

So I am interested in starting a series on Youtube called "Out of the Box" which I will use to do quick overviews on Ecigs and Atomizers in their natural unaltered state. I just made my first video ever and would like some feedback on both my video and presentation. Note I only had 10 minutes to think of what to say and make the video so this is a very rough draft of my concept.

Also if you are interested in the Oddysseus Transformer Rebuildable tank Atomizer this video may help you decide whether to buy it or pass it by. You can view the video with the link below. Thanks in advance for viewing.

Out of the Box-Oddysseus Transformer RBA - YouTube

 

[aeroforce156]

Ive gotten a few views but I am still in need of advice and feedback.

 

[bacc.vap]

With all the other reviewere out there, I think a simple demonstration like that probably would'nt draw much attention. You need some kind of schtick, and a full screen would'nt hurt either. If your just doing it for S's and Giggles I guess anything goes, but if you want to get views you'd have to go a bit more in depth. The review scene is pretty tough to get into and be successfull, unless, maybe, you can come up with something different from what's already out there. jmo