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Kent Brooks

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l like everything except... on Wakonda "Best Overall eliquid" doesn't ring right to me. What about "Most Votes Overall" instead? It seems more accurate, whereas the "Best Overall" almost sounds misleading because there was not a vote for "Best Overall". Does that make sense?

hehe, I dunno, that's what DanG called it ;)
 

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I need to see one of these on the wall of my man-cave to properly critique.

You have my address, I believe...

Exactly -- I was thinking it would make a great wallpaper -- and I don't mean for my desktop! :laugh:
I'm thinking half bath --- too much?

Would love to have this printed on the back of a black 3XLT T shirt with the logo in Clarks avi printed on the left breast.....;)

you can do it.jpg
 

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That is a very nice looking poster Kent, and conveys NT point perfectly.

There are a few things that stick out to me...well, things that I personally would change. At the top of the poster, there are the words "Members Choice Awards." I notice there was a drop shadow effect used on those words. The only way I could tell there is the effect is because it casts a shadow on the letters T - O - E and C on the text of "2014 Best Of ECF." I think the reason it is an eye sore to me Kent is because of the black background no other place do you see the drop shadow.

"Our award winning recipe is consistency, quality, and integrity," text at the very bottom of the poster, I would personally change the font to Lucida Calligraphy with italic's. Lucida Calligraphy will compliment the 2 fonts used throughout the poster very nicely, plus it will make all of your fonts "pop." The rule of thumb is to use 3 different fonts on an advertising poster.

Lastly, and just my opinion again, I would back the opacity back just a bit on the #1, #2 and #3's to show a bit more showing the details behind them. I do know that opacity can be very tricky because you do not want to deemphasize the importance of the ratings.

I hope I am not stepping out of bounds here Kent. I guess I just cannot get the Disney Graphic Artist out of me, even after retiring. Job well done.
 

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Good Lord grover, you're a pro! Lookit that! :thumb:

Right after I hit the "Post Quick Reply" key, I began questioning myself about should I have sent that. NT is doing just fine without my opinion, nor do they need my opinion in their marketing. The poster that Kent shared with us is very well done, there is no doubt about that.
 

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Right after I hit the "Post Quick Reply" key, I began questioning myself about should I have sent that. NT is doing just fine without my opinion, nor do they need my opinion in their marketing. The poster that Kent shared with us is very well done, there is no doubt about that.



You offered constructive and professional criticism. Kent put it out there for just that - no need to second guess yourself. :)
 
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