This is my first coil rebuild.
Specs-
smok Magneto
Ehpro Omega atty
Using 26 ga Kanthal wire
and peaches & creme cotton string
Nice work for your first attempt at this! A couple of points that I think will help.
You've got too much wick in there. When you're putting the wick inside the coils you don't want to also have wick touching the outside of the coils. What will happen is where there is wick outside, there is no air flow on either side of the wire and so no vapor coming from there. Those areas will also get too hot.
You've closed off the two air holes with wick which is not good no matter how much wick you're using.
You're wrapping big diameter coils and getting a lot of wick inside them. That's not bad, but you don't have much room in this atty. I would try using fewer strands inside the coils, make the coils a bit smaller in diameter to suit and use more wraps to get the resistance you want. This will also allow you to move the coils a bit off center counterclockwise looking down at them so they are a bit closer to in front of the air holes and I think also help you build with less yarn.
You really only need to leave enough wick hanging out of the coils to touch the deck and soak up juice. The yarn is very absorbent and will move juice quite fast.
Good luck with it!