MajorSmoke.com Twin EGO-T Contest

[jjd]

spacekitty:

Thanks for the sig feedback. From my browser, when I click anywhere on my signature it goes to majorsmoke webstore. Does it do it for you? Thanks again!

- John

The first thing I would do, and this has nothing to do with your site... is to add a link in your sig!!!

 

[Lauralie]

Worked for me - leave up to SK - good job lady!

 

[36tinybells]

Ok, always glad to see a new store- so congrats! Now on to my review:
On the homepage the type in the upper right is difficult to read- and since that's contact info and "satifaction guaranteed", please make it clearer. Also, free shipping is a big deal- I would make that stand out more.
Next: In the FAQ the answer to "does the e-cig have a taste" answers- The taste of the e-cigarette resembles the taste of traditional tobacco, but users tend to find it smoother and cleaner as it lacks many other componentsof real cigarette. We also have several flavors to choose from, such as: strawberry, grape, menthol (mint) , chocolate, coffee, vanilla and more.
I think many of us would change the start of that answer to " the taste of the e-cigarette depends on the juice that is put in. It can resemble the taste of traditiional.....
Good luck and thanks for the contest.

 

[spacekitty]

spacekitty:

Thanks for the sig feedback. From my browser, when I click anywhere on my signature it goes to majorsmoke webstore. Does it do it for you? Thanks again!

- John

I didn't even see the banner before... everything looks A-Ok to me now... link works fine, too!!

Your avi sort of reminds of one of my favorite geek websites:
MajorGeeks.com - Download Freeware and Shareware Computer Utilities.

 

[thehangdude]

I see the Facebook and Twitter "Follow us" links are now working. Very nice. The YouTube is still inactive.

When I go to the Free Shipping page, I get a "Done, but with errors" message in my status bar of Windows Explorer. This is the page with all the Share icons.

On the FAQ page, under "Why do people use electronic cigarettes" it states: The main reasons people use e-cigarettes are because e-cigarettes provide a tar free smoking option, freedom to smoke most anywhere and everywhere, no first or second hand smoke, no smoke or odor, non-flammable, convenient and cheaper than traditional cigarettes when used regularly.

Warning: E-cigarettes have not evaluated by U.S. FDA.
The first part is a confusing run-on sentence. The last senence is missing the word "been".

 

[jbmcdan]

glad you got your sig link working! I still think you should lose the chick in the fedora.....

i like that the free shipping is now on the front page, but i still think you could shout it out a little more....most ecig vendors that offer free shipping SCREAM it at you lol

 

[jjd]

I like majorgeeks.com too. It must have been lurking in the back of my mind. The Beetle Bailey comics also come to mind as comic'd military personnel.

- John

I didn't even see the banner before... everything looks A-Ok to me now... link works fine, too!!

Your avi sort of reminds of one of my favorite geek websites:
MajorGeeks.com - Download Freeware and Shareware Computer Utilities.

 

[jjd]

glad you got your sig link working! I still think you should lose the chick in the fedora.....

i like that the free shipping is now on the front page, but i still think you could shout it out a little more....most ecig vendors that offer free shipping SCREAM it at you lol

I agree. It is a good selling point. Many don't take that into account when they compare prices.

- John

 

[Keener]

Initial impression of the front page was good... easy navigation, digging the background black-splatter look.

I agree with some of the others that the pictures are sliiightly blanded out with the white inner background, although I like that the description is pretty well a full one without having to go into the item for more than 2-3 words of a lowdown.

Overall I find it attractive and it seems easy to use. Great seeing you all with a singular online presence!

 

[keelalagirl55]

Not sure if this has been mentioned or not, but in your FAQ section asking if a lighter is needed....quote - "No, you do not need a lighter for the any of our e-cigarettes, it’s an electronic device. Do not try to light any e-cigarette with any source of flame." Don't need "the". I know there was another typo....I'll find it

 

[keelalagirl55]

Found it Under what is the smoke....

"The "smoke" that is released from e-cigarettes is simply a vapor that evaporates into the air within seconds. Our E-Cigarettes leaves no residue in the air, and it will not harm anyone around you with second-hand smoke traditional cigarettes."

 

[jjd]

Not sure if this has been mentioned or not, but in your FAQ section asking if a lighter is needed....quote - "No, you do not need a lighter for the any of our e-cigarettes, it’s an electronic device. Do not try to light any e-cigarette with any source of flame." Don't need "the". I know there was another typo....I'll find it

Keelalagirl,

That attention to detail is very much appreciated. I fixed the typo. Thank you!

- John

 

[keelalagirl55]

Keelalagirl,

That attention to detail is very much appreciated. I fixed the typo. Thank you!

- John

you are most welcome....I didn't figure that would be an area most would check out for ya

 

[webbcm127]

I like the looks of the site and that you provide some info and media stuff, makes it seem like your passionate about not only what u sell but about the ecig experience in itself, good luck with you venture!-)

 

[keelalagirl55]

Found a few more....
Does the e-cigarette have a taste?

"The taste of the e-cigarette resembles the taste of traditional tobacco, but users tend to find it smoother and cleaner as it lacks many other componentsof real cigarette. We also have several flavors to choose from, such as: strawberry, grape, menthol (mint) , chocolate, coffee, vanilla and more."


Can anyone use an e-cigarette?

"No, e-cigarettes is intended for use only by adults (18 years of age and older) and it is not intended to be used by pregnant women (since it contains nicotine) and those that are sensitive to nicotine."

plural/singular...should be either "the e-cigarette is" and all bolded work, or e-cigarettes "are" (are replacing both bolded)

The only other suggestion I have for the FAQ's would be to include a note about all the other 5000+ chemicals and additives found in traditional cigarettes under the question regarding why people use e-cigs Just to really hit home as to why regular ciggies are so much worse...many smokers have no clue that there are chemicals actually added to the tobacco in cigarettes.

 

[jjd]

Found a few more....
Does the e-cigarette have a taste?

"The taste of the e-cigarette resembles the taste of traditional tobacco, but users tend to find it smoother and cleaner as it lacks many other componentsof real cigarette. We also have several flavors to choose from, such as: strawberry, grape, menthol (mint) , chocolate, coffee, vanilla and more."


Can anyone use an e-cigarette?

"No, e-cigarettes is intended for use only by adults (18 years of age and older) and it is not intended to be used by pregnant women (since it contains nicotine) and those that are sensitive to nicotine."

plural/singular...should be either "the e-cigarette is" and all bolded work, or e-cigarettes "are" (are replacing both bolded)

The only other suggestion I have for the FAQ's would be to include a note about all the other 5000+ chemicals and additives found in traditional cigarettes under the question regarding why people use e-cigs Just to really hit home as to why regular ciggies are so much worse...many smokers have no clue that there are chemicals actually added to the tobacco in cigarettes.

Thanks! I fixed the typos and grammar. I left out the part about the 5000+ chemicals in traditional cigarettes. It sounds much like a health comparison or health claim and that's a no-no according to the FDA and the ECF.

Much appreciated!

 

[thehangdude]

I like the layout of your site. I did find a problem (once you get more product). When you go to a page like Accessories or Starter Kits, it lists things in alphabetic order. Then you have an option to "sort by". If you choose to sort by any means, if takes you to a page with all items sorted, not just Starter Kits. This is also a problem with "ascending order".

The javascript should keep you on the same page and only change the order of items on that page.

 

[ISBN]

An additional line of electronic cigarettes without nicotine is available, but since its popularity is really low we do not carry it in stock, you may however write us and show your interest in the product and if enough requests are received we will be more than willing to add that line to our ready-to-ship



You may want to edit this paragraph.
I do have a few suggestions but I do not want to overstep my bounds.

 

[jjd]

I like the layout of your site. I did find a problem (once you get more product). When you go to a page like Accessories or Starter Kits, it lists things in alphabetic order. Then you have an option to "sort by". If you choose to sort by any means, if takes you to a page with all items sorted, not just Starter Kits. This is also a problem with "ascending order".

The javascript should keep you on the same page and only change the order of items on that page.

Thanks thehangdude,

The devil is in the details and that one wasn't spotted before. Thanks again!

- John

 

[jjd]

An additional line of electronic cigarettes without nicotine is available, but since its popularity is really low we do not carry it in stock, you may however write us and show your interest in the product and if enough requests are received we will be more than willing to add that line to our ready-to-ship



You may want to edit this paragraph.
I do have a few suggestions but I do not want to overstep my bounds.

Isbnbook,

Suggestions are always encouraged. There's no overstepping so if you'd like, please share.

Thanks again!

- John