Looks great for your first micro coil. And I super jealous of the Pluid. I have to settle for a Pluid copy until I can get my hands on some.
Also if you want to get your coils to touch, try dry burning it until it glows, let off the button and squeeze the coils together with a needle nose pliers. I am not the best at wrapping the coils super tight, but the burn and pinch method usually helps make the coil much better. Though I don't honestly notice a difference if they are all touching or have small gaps.