I would juice it and hit the fire button without the top cap on for the amount of time you normally pull on it so you can see if any wires nr the legs start to glow and do this a few times till its almost dry, this would eliminate the idea of hot spots, it is very possible to wick your coil tight or perfect and still get the last wrap of the coil glow, vaping a glowing wire will give you a nasty taste similar to burnt cotton and will normally be the top of a coil on the end where the cotton sags away from it.
The plumeveil is a nice little atty for taste but imo has nowhere near enough airflow, the way i overcame the airflow was to purchase some chuff topcaps to replace the plumeveils TC and also turning the barrel part of the atty upside down, not only does this give you more air but you also block off the holes that leak your juice when you over fill
Not having enough airflow will suffocate you on the first pull or you may just get a real hot vape, dependent on how much power you are vaping at.
Another thing to watch out for with using the standard driptip cap is that it fits inside the barrel which reduces the chamber size or deck space, have to be aware of this so as not to put your coils to close to it.
If you have to use the 24g then i would go with 6wraps dual 3/32id, although personally i would go less wraps than that so as to get it fired up quickly, the thing with heavy gauge wire is that if it takes to long to heat up it will produce alot of heat, i super sub ohm most of the time and take 1/2 second pulls which fill my lungs instantly, the 1/2 sec pulls keep the heat to almost zero. 26g kanthal is prob alot better for you or even 28g and maybe stick with the kanthal over the nichrome80 as you will need more wraps of it most likely producing more heat for that atty.
Try and get your wick perfect, when i pull mine through it has resistance and then if its a little to tight you can always pull it to and fro a few times to loosen it up, you will finally get to that stage where the wicking becomes second nature and you'll be able to do it with your eyes closed, especially if you use the cotton pads.
Your juice ratio may even be the problem, you said that the first hit is good then i think you say the 3rd was rough, to me thats a wicking issue, Vg is thick, but as your atty takes on heat it should make it a little runnier.
Maybe start making your own, you'll never look back and you can experiment with ratios as it suits you, ive vaped high %Vg juice and have worked my way back to 50/50, i dont see alot of difference in vapour but the flavour is much better.
the following vid i pinched from youtube but its an excellent example of how to wick but i will say that this style of wicking with all the cotton is more suited to hotter vapes, but he shows a few techniques that may help