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...as agent Maxwell slipped, Billie Bob rushed at him. Those damned standard issue loafers the agents wore had no traction and Maxwell's feet went airborne. Billie bob reached him just as his back struck the hard, yet slippery clay. His arms and legs all pointing skyward he helplessly watch her leap over him, kicking his 9mm Beretta out of reach. By the time he'd rolled over, clutching his wrist, trying to catch the wind forced from him by the impact, agent Maxwell watched the fugitives hop into his gov't issue SUV and tear off down the road...
 

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As he watched Chrissy looking out the back window shrugging.

(Storyline update: I guess everyone forgot Chrissy was with Agent Maxwell - and that she was in the SUV to help him. Also that Shane was actually trying to get away from Billie Bob, since Agent Maxwell knew that Shane really had nothing to do with Billie Bob robbing the bank.)
 
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An old white Buick Park Ave slowed down and pulled to the side of the lonely road. The woman behind the wheel had stark long white hair. Her face was sunk in and withdrawn and time was definitely not on her side. Years of unpleasantness showed in her stamina as she crouched over the leather covered steering wheel.
 

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"Yes, Mame I need your car in pursuit of some dangerous fugitives that have stolen my vehicle". He flashes his shiny badge and asks her to kindly get in the backseat. "You may be in for one hell of a ride" he exclaims. "I can't leave you stranded out here alone and this is official business"
 

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Shane was so relieved to see the agent that he bolted straight for him, waving his hand high to show he was unarmed. As he closed he could see... no... what's she doing here? The one person he most wanted to see, his darling Chrissy was in the big black gov't SUV. Shane couldn't help himself but to veer toward the ominous looking Escalade that bore to him his salvation. Somehow, just as he was about to throw open the passenger door, Billie Bob was bolting past. As the passenger door opened and the arms of his beloved circled his shoulders, Billie Bob was in the driver's seat and smashing the shifter arm into gear. As the lovers reunited in their vise like embrace, Billie Bob tramped the gas pedal and as Shane held on for dear life to his love, who was still belted into the front seat, the monsterous ebony Cadillac tore on down the road...
 
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