I...I don't believe what I am about to type but...
I agree with Kinabaloo, at least in spirit, on some of his points. Maybe not the specific re-writes because quite frankly I believe they are propaganda
The point I will make is this; the FDA has proven that eCigs are at least 99% safer than cigarettes. The problem is, their research is being attacked from MANY sides via peer review and is NOT holding up so quite frankly, I do not believe anything they state in regard to this subject "health effect"-wise should be written in ANY WAY as authoritative...
and this actual FACT (as opposed to the FDA's opinion...which seems to run counter to the data...which makes it even worse...) should be heavily referenced and footnoted.
It is fair and truthful to state their position and belief that they have jurisdiction over eCigs as drug delivery devices however it should be *crystal clear* that this too, is in contention.
And a personal note: I do not like the "politically correct-i-fied" term "Personal Vaporizer". It sounds like some sort of ray gun, or a drug delivery device and is probably more harmful than helpful as the term really draws Away from the true intended use of the product: tobacco cigarette replacement.
I like the style though. Where are you published.