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seraphicdragon

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Bah I HATE POWER POINT I HATE MATH right now i plain HATE everything.. its not been a good morning can you tell sigh... anyways hate to be a pest but wanna run this poem by you if you all dont mind.. its going along with my power point presentation that i cant get to play the music right on grrr...

Picture’s for a thousand words
Words can be cruel and harsh
Sharper then knives or swords
Dark
Damp
Rotten
Twisted
Death to Scare you
Night to Haunt you
Light to Taunt you
These are the words I see
Visions of Torment
Seasons of Loss
Life with no meaning
The creature is at the cross
To Love To Hate
To Live To Die
To Learn
These are the words I see.
 

PittBoss

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Bah I HATE POWER POINT I HATE MATH right now i plain HATE everything.. its not been a good morning can you tell sigh... anyways hate to be a pest but wanna run this poem by you if you all dont mind.. its going along with my power point presentation that i cant get to play the music right on grrr...

Picture’s for a thousand words
Words can be cruel and harsh
Sharper then knives or swords
Dark
Damp
Rotten
Twisted
Death to Scare you
Night to Haunt you
Light to Taunt you
These are the words I see
Visions of Torment
Seasons of Loss
Life with no meaning
The creature is at the cross
To Love To Hate
To Live To Die
To Learn
These are the words I see.

That's very.....umm, dark and pessimistic.
 

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Bah I HATE POWER POINT I HATE MATH right now i plain HATE everything.. its not been a good morning can you tell sigh... anyways hate to be a pest but wanna run this poem by you if you all dont mind.. its going along with my power point presentation that i cant get to play the music right on grrr...

Picture’s for a thousand words
Words can be cruel and harsh
Sharper then knives or swords
Dark
Damp
Rotten
Twisted
Death to Scare you
Night to Haunt you
Light to Taunt you
These are the words I see
Visions of Torment
Seasons of Loss
Life with no meaning
The creature is at the cross
To Love To Hate
To Live To Die
To Learn
These are the words I see.

Wow Sweet pea....deep breath.
By the way...all the best poems start with...
There once was a man from Nantucket....
I know....limerick....but still award winning stuff.

The poem was a bit dark...but poets are brooders by nature so I guess you have to get in character. But still...deep breath and come here and vent. That's what I do...

Like this....

WARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKEWARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKS...

Now I feel better....
 

seraphicdragon

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Wow Sweet pea....deep breath.
By the way...all the best poems start with...
There once was a man from Nantucket....
I know....limerick....but still award winning stuff.

The poem was a bit dark...but poets are brooders by nature so I guess you have to get in character. But still...deep breath and come here and vent. That's what I do...

Like this....

WARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKEWARRENSUCKSWARRENSUCKS...

Now I feel better....

lol the poem was written in context to my pictures i have been showin gon her for my power point presentation and i wanted to show that just because the stories are all dark and dramatic and well sad and depressing we are still learning from the words that we are reading.

other hten it being dark which is the point was it a good poem?
 

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lol the poem was written in context to my pictures i have been showin gon her for my power point presentation and i wanted to show that just because the stories are all dark and dramatic and well sad and depressing we are still learning from the words that we are reading.

other hten it being dark which is the point was it a good poem?

Well...I always pick the wrong picture so take my opinion with a grain, but yeah. I see where you were going. I liked it.
Not Nantucket good, but good.

How you doing sugar britches????
Haven't chatted with you for a while. When this semester/trimester or whatever they call it nowadays is over you can chill for a while hopefully. Lounge by the pool drinking bloody Mary's all day.
 

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lol the poem was written in context to my pictures i have been showin gon her for my power point presentation and i wanted to show that just because the stories are all dark and dramatic and well sad and depressing we are still learning from the words that we are reading.

other hten it being dark which is the point was it a good poem?

I don't care what Hawk says, I like it!
 

Jakersvape

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Well...I always pick the wrong picture so take my opinion with a grain, but yeah. I see where you were going. I liked it.
Not Nantucket good, but good.

How you doing sugar britches????
Haven't chatted with you for a while. When this semester/trimester or whatever they call it nowadays is over you can chill for a while hopefully. Lounge by the pool drinking bloody Mary's all day.

I want to lounge by your pool drinking natty all day....
 

seraphicdragon

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yup yup hopefully... that is if i dont find a job which if i dont find a job wont be able to aford many bloody marys at all anyways rofl


Well...I always pick the wrong picture so take my opinion with a grain, but yeah. I see where you were going. I liked it.
Not Nantucket good, but good.

How you doing sugar britches????
Haven't chatted with you for a while. When this semester/trimester or whatever they call it nowadays is over you can chill for a while hopefully. Lounge by the pool drinking bloody Mary's all day.
 
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