2. Nemesis with stillare, 24g 6 wraps dual coils separate. .4 ohm, cotton
Both hit well, but cloud is same or less than my Provari and Nautilus.....
I ran this setup through
the Steam Engine coil wrapping calculator. Your coil internal diameter is 5mm in order to get the 6/5 wraps I see in the picture. Heat flux (watts per surface area) at 30 watts is quite low, so your coils may not be getting hot enough to make a lot of vapor.
For 0.3-0.6 ohm dual coil setups I like using 27 gauge Kanthal. I switch to 24 gauge for 0.2 ohms. The thicker the wire the lower the resistance per inch of it. So you can design a thicker, longer wire with high surface area and mass that has the same resistance as a thinner, shorter wire. Too much surface area and you have too little power per square inch to vaporize juice quickly. In this case wire mass also goes up and that means it takes longer for the wire to heat up.
I would also suggest you go a bit smaller than 5mm ID, say 4mm at most. I currently stay between 2.5-3mm. I can't tell if your coil is centered vertically behind the air slot, but it looks great left to right. Smaller diameter will allow better air flow over and under the coil. I bring the coils reasonably close to the inside of the cap, without risking them touching the cap.
IMO you have two choices here. Use less 24 gauge wire to make lower resistance or use thinner wire for a 0.4 ohm build. If you have no thinner wire I would try a 0.3 ohm build on a 3mm pin and see how that vapes.
The amount of cotton you're using looks good to me.
Make sure your battery can handle the amp draw of your build resistance at 4.2v.