I agree with Semi. "Stare all you want" may be cute, but it is also sarcastic; probably not a good selling point.
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this is just one t-shirt version there will be another that says volt on the front and just the SI logo on the back 
this is just the "cheeky" one...
the saying was from our t-shirt logo contest a while back
this is just the "cheeky" one...the saying was from our t-shirt logo contest a while back
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YIKES! Your graphic designer was WRONG!what do you guys think... need my grammar gurus to help lol?
The 3 dots after "stare" take away the giddiness - I think the front should have more attitude, to say what it means to say. Maybe something like this:
STARE
all you
WANT
all you
WANT
Typo on the back (it's) and the "!" makes no sense at all where it is. Maybe like this:
...it's just
VAPOR!
VAPOR!
...that was the slogan that won the t-shirt contest, right? I think it's cute...I'd wear it if it had more attitude!
But yeah, nobody ever pays attention to the back. With a jacket on or just quickly passing by, the purpose of advertising would probably be lost on these...haha, unless you're standing in line!
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what do you guys think...need my grammar gurus to help lol?
Why is the exclamation point after "just"?
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Excellent. And the font sizes get the point across with the right amount of cheekiness.
Yay for t-shirts. I already have been wearing the ecf ones for nearly a year now. They are some what plain with only a small inscription on the front, but they go with everything. I would proberly go more for the other tshirt that you mentioned with a logo on the front and the vapor spiel on the back. The changes look much better.
I am just having some coffee and vaping dunhill and about to pop out the door. Its playstation day with the nephew today
Stay warm everyone ( its freezing here, wet & cloudy) see ya later
I am just having some coffee and vaping dunhill and about to pop out the door. Its playstation day with the nephew today
Stay warm everyone ( its freezing here, wet & cloudy) see ya later
Here's a quick and dirty of what I was talking about earlier...what do you guys think... need my grammar gurus to help lol?
...heehee, made my oatmeal too hot! Waiting for it to cool off...
I'm having tea afterwards...maybe I can do something with the back next!
Oops, didn't see the revisions...better, but still kinda boring...
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Somehow the "it's just Vapor" on the back makes me think of a farting man.... but I'm weird like that.
ok redone
I like that better. The SI logo on top was also something I was contemplating, it looked weird at the mid/bottom.
What about the idea of swapping the location of text from front to back; is that out of the question?
Great too see you too I loved the birds nesting and your gorgeous property photos
ok redone
Those look nice.
Yay for t-shirts. I already have been wearing the ecf ones for nearly a year now. They are some what plain with only a small inscription on the front, but they go with everything. I would proberly go more for the other tshirt that you mentioned with a logo on the front and the vapor spiel on the back. The changes look much better.
I am just having some coffee and vaping dunhill and about to pop out the door. Its playstation day with the nephew today
Stay warm everyone ( its freezing here, wet & cloudy) see ya later
It's going to be 94 here today. I can't imagine wet and cold lol.
ROTFLMAO @ Jen
Hey girlfriend sorry you have been feeling flat lately I hope your not coming down with something. The wedding plans have been coming together well. Trying to get all done in just a couple of months has been hard but as you know my father is terminally ill so it means everything to us for him to be there ♡
Wow! Less than two weeks!!
It's a mad rush getting everything done, but when the day arrives relax and savor the day.
Wow! Less than two weeks!!
It's a mad rush getting everything done, but when the day arrives relax and savor the day.
Yes hopefully I will run around like a lunatic tying up loose ends the week before (Omg next week!) and totally be able to savour the day lol OCD is a bad thing for events llike this lmao
i was going to stay and chat but my furball keeps sitting on my hands for attention, we are fighting over the keyboardgotta love her though, she knows when i should be getting some sleep and she knows that she makes me feel better too!!
Goodearlymorning night
Meant to ask yesterday, how's Tommy doing these days? Haven't seen you post much about him lately.
Morning Volties.
Good luck on the upcoming nuptials MegaBee !!
Like the T-Shirt, but I still think that the front and back need to be swapped.
Good luck on the upcoming nuptials MegaBee !!
Like the T-Shirt, but I still think that the front and back need to be swapped.
Good Morning VoltVille...
It is Monday - back when I had regular employment - it was my favorite day of the week - resting up from the honey doo work over the weekend... LOL
It is Monday - back when I had regular employment - it was my favorite day of the week - resting up from the honey doo work over the weekend... LOL
I'd like to have one with just the SI side on the back. Don't care anything about someone staring at me. Course I can see where the front would be interesting on some ladies with an attitude or pride in their frontal area.
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