Please join us at the DIY forum:
DIY E-Liquid
Honestly, you'll get more help and guidance there, and I have a feeling many things may be "off" in your current liquid. The nic may not be high enough and your PG may be too low as well for a decent throat hit.
IDK what wattage you are vaping at, but it shouldn't burn, either.
You just can't throw random things together and expect to get a decent eliquid at the end of it.
What types of liquids were you vaping BEFORE your creation (LOL, oddly your questions remind me of trying to make "perfumes" out of actual flowers when I was about five. I was quite convinced it would work, and it DID work to keep badgers and other animals away from me, LOL someone in my family quietly removed it after I went to bed). So, I understand the desire to have a great vape, but just come on over to the DIY forum and say, "Okay, we are going to start over."
Because, it sounds like you should and there are tons of tools and resources to help you.
Welcome.
Anna