I can tell you for sure, too much cotton in there, by about half. you want it just long enough to reach the wall of the chamber, any more than that is too much. Those coils are 'okay', if the kit still comes with wire, or you have some, you can do much better with a compressed coil, 26 or 28 ga kanthal, 2.5-3mm, 4 to 8 wraps.
Also, the juice I was using just sucks...period. It's really subjective, but that one is a HELL NO in my book.