@aaron
There are a whole bunch of problems with your article, but the most obvious faults are the headline and initial tone, which intend to scare or worry people about non-existent issues; and the repetition of the FDA fraudulent press release, which has caused us unending problems.
The facts of the FDA's lab tests are not in dispute - indeed, they point out just how safe e-cigarettes are.
1. They found that any carcinogens present are at exactly the same level as those in NRTs (if you don't know what these are, please look it up). These amounts are, in the words of Prof Rodu (the world authority on the oral pathology of tobacco consumption), a level which is "a million times lower than conceivably harmful to health". The FDA conveniently forgot to mention this.
Instead of pointing these facts out, the FDA lied about them by misrepresenting their importance in a press release which had little or no relation to the factual content of the lab tests. The FDA are liars, and to repeat their lies does not improve a journalist's reputation - it makes them look a fool.
2. Contaminants are present in anything and everything. The important element is the amount, since any toxic effect is dose-dependent. The reason you are not harmed by contaminants in your food, despite their undoubted presence, is that you might need to eat two tons of the offending item before any toxic effect could be detected. The same goes for the ecigs tested by the FDA; even though only 1 sample in 18 showed positive: you could not be harmed by the vapor (since no contamination was detected in vapor, which a journalist who did any research might consider a useful point). You would need to drink the contents of 1,000 cartomizers before experiencing any issue from toxicity. Since it is all but impossible to extract all the contents of a cartomizer without using some kind of solvent process, you would actually need to eat 1,000 cartomizers. I suggest that long before any minor contaminant had any effect, you would be dead from some other cause. The FDA conveniently forgot to mention this.
Instead of pointing these facts out, the FDA lied about them by misrepresenting them. The FDA are liars, and to repeat their lies does not improve a journalist's reputation - it makes them look a complete fool.
The FDA has the well-deserved reputation of being the most corrupt large government agency in the world; whether or not that is true is not important because it is without doubt the world's best example of a regulatory-captured one. I suggest that if you want to write an interesting article about how the citizens of a country are in fact income-earning units for large industries and have a lot less free will than they think, then you look up 'regulatory capture' and follow that road. At least you won't get accused of hysterical fear-mongering here - we have to fight the effects of regulatory capture every day.
The FDA works for the pharmaceutical industry not public health (and appears to act for the cigarette trade as a result), and publishes lies, misrepresentation and propaganda without restraint in the THR area. Maybe that is less interesting to your readers than a hyped-up farrago of nonexistent issues, but promoting pharmaceutical industry propaganda as you did by repeating their dross does not help anyone.
As you are in the UK you might be interested in a local site with more information on these issues. Some research there might improve the quality of your next article about ecigs:
The 20% Rule
Also try this page of quotes from the medical experts in this field, on the World Vaping Day site:
Quotes
If you are happy to pursue a career as a Sunday Sport / News of the World type of journalist (National Enquirer-style, in the USA), then have it it, dude. Otherwise learn lesson #1: ask the users first. They know what they are talking about, and don't have any commercial agenda.