Rave is probably recovering from her busy weekend so she hasn't seen this drawing yet. Would you guys like to critique it for me? I know it's kinda small but the original was small.
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Good morning.
I based the tilt of the head on the line of the top of his face from ears to nose. The line in the photo is more horizontal than yours. But that doesn't seem so important to me, and to change it might mean some major changes.
I'm more concerned with the line that defines his back from his tail. From the spot just behind his shoulders where the back first meets the tail to his ...., your line is straighter. In the photo, it's more of a backwards C. That and the highlight and shading for the hind leg and hip make yours look flatter. I hope Rave will come soon. Maybe she'll see it, too and be able to explain better what I'm seeing.
Yes - absolutely. His back needs to be more rounded outward toward the tail instead of being so straight up and down. This is going to encroach on the tail area somewhat. Also the gap between the body and the tail (the dark shadowed area) should not come down so low and its finish should be rounded rather than pointy.
All in all - It's incredible!! I'm so impressed with this. There are a few things that haven't been mentioned.
Lose the eyeliner under the white area surrounding the eye. More shadowing to show where the head meets the body. Emphasize and enlarge the tilda "~" that should extend between the nose to under the eye. There should be a dark patch behind the elbow.
But still ... WOW!