yes the coil looks to long, but can be straightened out. the connection at the bottom of pic looks like its ok because its connected to the screw the correct way, but the top connection looks like its connected to the screw the opposite way, if the top lead was connected to the screw the opposite way, it may straighten it out better. come to the opposite side of the screw on the top coil. hard though to really tell, but to get a relaxed coil it needs to be slightly smaller in length, when its to long, and as you tighten the screws it scrunches the coil. I think you can still keep the same number of wraps, just make the coil a little tighter and make the connections to the correct side of the screws. everything else looks good, maybe the tails are a tad to long and the wick is a tad to thick. reduce the diameter of the cotton slightly and trim the tales slightly. but like you said if the coils are not making contact, it heats up to much.