This is pretty far removed from what the Fizzy Gin Breeze started as, which is of course, not a problem if you like it. Looks like you replaced pineapple with Kiwi. No pomegranate which does bring the tart. If you wanted to pursue this, and I am not suggesting you should, I would go back to the original and make changes, one at a time, from there. Or else, move on. Personally, I am liking the Cranberry Pomegranate Champagne Sparkler, the Fizzy Sea Breeze, and the Pineapple Basil Rum Fizz more than the Gin Breeze.