The start of the revision. TIOA sns 1 eps 1
The beginning:
9/2 - 6: It has been a horrible couple of weeks, Angel had enough of it and decided to buy a lottery ticket, she just hoped to win. She went home frustrated that night and really did not eat anything, her boss was grating on her and she just felt like going to bed and maybe getting on the laptop. She eventually nodded off, but later her eyes opened and she thought about the tickets. She looked the numbers up online and as more of the numbers matched her eyes got bigger. She could not believe it and checked them all again one more time, she had in fact had all the numbers to a record Mega Millions. Angel had just won 800 million dollars, after taxes she just made a cool 400 million.
The idea of getting away pleased her and she immediately started looking for an island to purchase. She would quit the next day and make sure to get things squared away. It took some time, but Angel had the money secured away and on the next day signed papers purchasing an island. She went back to her home and checked on travel, she had a local private jet liner take her on a ride over. She flew over and could not wait to have buildings made and move there. She loved her family and friends and invited them all to come if they wished to do so. Angel worked out some more details and about one year later, they were ready to move. Angel had boats take them over, the housing was pleasant and more than needed.
On the Island of Angel, all the family of the tree came together. All loving and enjoying each other, in time like it happens there are some things that do not fly with one party or another. So steps in Uncle the rule keeper, reminding people gently of the rules; sometimes they needed a kick, with deputy Ranger standing in agreement. Things would settle down, and the family would play nice and all be together again.
The next day stirs, it is time for Tiggs to fix the breakfast, up early and getting some coffee ready for the rest of the people about to wake up. The rest stir and some give a prayer before getting active, all is good on the Island of Angel.
What? there is another problem!! Someone has gone out and purchased some more vapemail, the agreement was to not purchase anything until the new year. A bet was even place friendly, loser pays out, or winner cashes in. Who is the culprit, what did they do? Some are thinking they know who did and watch, can it be? "It was not me!!" says Blue, no doubt how was she framed? So people's minds start to wonder. Is there someone on the island that was not part of the tree family? That was a little scary, if they were invited that would be a good thing, the tree family was growing.
The minds of the family start to think together, it could not possibly be Shawn. "No." he promised, could it be JPF? No not likely thought most, then who could it be? Why is there a camel on the island? Who all is on the island?
7/12 - 4: I will post of those here and there. A better start I hope.
Anyhoo, nuttin' serious going on here today, just pitching more politics... I mean, horse sheet...
...that is the whole point of your creation...it is yours...and unique to your unique talents and gifts .... The reader willtotally get the names .as they are.... in fact ...it's their originality that resonates with me.... But you must make that call, Tiggs ... (pss...there are other editors ...) It is just a matter on whether you want published now (her way) ...or later (your way ..or a compromise )
